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ye...re-read my lines n left out the word 'with' in my
" using paint laced "with" alcahol" line

neways...it still works, just not as good.

Uppin dis. Vote and leave a link. We'll hit it up Peace .................................................. .............................................

here's the dealio~

flow-dek
structure-dek
punches-pretty even
creativity-tie
mulies-tie i guess
metas-tie i guess

overall-dek

even battle..props to both...

peACE

Punches: Tie
Flow: Dek
Personal: Tie
Overal Dek

Vote Dek

I took the time hit me up...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91975

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leave links i will respond. but maybe not till tomorrow cus i'm bout to log off.

yer first & 2nd lines were not understandable in a sense of mind
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dek^
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3rd and 4th no better
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dek^
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5th and 6th didnt make sense either
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dek^
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7th & 8th were yer best shit
keep doing stuff like that
its pretty hard hitting
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dek^
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yer last lines were good 2
but y have only 4 lines that make sense?
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dek^
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tags verse was kinda off the wall but made more sense
and u need to improve yer structure
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the rest of tags verse was ok but kinda weak
but do to deks wackness ima have 2 give this 2 tag
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vote/ tag fo now
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yo someone please check this out ok
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980
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Dek took this with a lil better punchs thou not his best and the 1st line of the others guys was hella long. damn dawg there are things called sentances. anyways Vote Dek

sorry forgot to put this

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=92396

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hmm this was kinda close
but dek came wacker...lol
tag, i see that you are elevating...
but the next step for you is cleaning up your lines and makin em flow better and punch harder...

vote tag
- j six

aite battle both was wack i liked deks vocabulary even though it's a battle homie you really need more punches tag was aite but stupid punches he was just talkin about killin him for no reason lmao that was herbish but vote is Dek ya both~elevate......feedback on my battle on sig ~1