Vote Deacon..

It was very very good.. flow was awesome and the topic really was nice..

Emotion you came well also.. but parts didn't even rhyme which really hurt you... rhyme scheme was decent as well.

both came nice which is good to see...
stayed with the topic well...
and overall good verses...

i think deacon slightly edges it though,
just overall better verse,
props to both..

vote=deacon

the last word of mine doesnt ryme, it rymesinternally its just the way i have been recently setting it out.........but thanks for the votes.....battle goes to deaco, changin ac to my old style for next week...............lol

deacon (3-0)
Emotion (2-1)