nitro took this shit. he had punchlines, multis, and flow.
shi, don't stretch your lines. ur strukture is fuked up, need to improve on that. and ur verse overall was wack.

vote-nitro

Shi took this one with his word play and stuff. Nitro Ive heard half of those lines before but nice try - Peace

uppin this shit (1) ---1-1 battle hurr.............................................. ..........................

flow=neither
sustainment=nitro
enjoyment=tie
punches=nitro
metas=nitro
overall=nitro

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP OR I'LL KEEP BUGGIN YA PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94394

thanks ^^ uppin this shit.................(2).......................... ..(2)............................

uppin this shit (3) 2-1 battle me here..............uppin uppin..................(3)........................ .............................

uppin this shit (4)!!!!! its 2-1 me on 4th uppin cuz's .......................................(4) uppin..................................

Final Uppin ..... NOW!!1............................................ .................................................. ................................

nitro won this with prete much everything the other guys was more like a story so atherfore nitro win

thanks.........................<><><><><><><><><><<><<><><><><><><><>< just remember 2 poll vote.............................................. ...

Opener: Shi (couldn't tell how long your opener went but nitros was wack)
Closer: tie
Flow: Nitro
Structure: Nitro
Punches: Nitro
Personals: Nitro
Win: Nitro
Work on your structure Shi. Both need elevatin, but Nitto took this with personals and punches

^ Thanks.....................4-1 .................................................. ......................(My name is Nitro no Nitto )

flow - tie.............
sustainment - nitro..............
punches - nitro..................
metas - nitro..............
overall - nitro..................
my vote - nitro................