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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93377
^ ^ Yo shit was tight dude. good flow, kinda basic but i like the thaughts u had some words repeated a few times, not bad but use more vocab otherwise good shit hit my battle if u can.... |
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fuck u and your weak ass shit.dat shit licks nuts
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^^^ Hmm.....I feel anger from you my friend. I suggest you calm down. You;re to small to start somethin with me. plez just calm down.
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too small dude ill fuck u up.u dont wanna fuck wit CTF.we run dis shit down here in da dirty tenn.mane u da small weak bitch who need to shut da fuck up.u kno da bizzness!!!?!
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good flow
nice structure good descriptive words (imagery) nice closing overall this was a pretty good drop Return the favor, dogg: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392 |
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Bitch shut the fuck up and get out of my fuckin thread. Like I said your ass is to weak and whack for me. Don't think I didnt see that whack shit you posted. |
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thanks for the feedback. I'll hit u up |
nice drop overall 7.5/10 ...keep ya head held high
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uppin
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stio sleepin
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uppin
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feedback
whats up play your piece flowed well, ended well, some good lines stood out great. Only thing i would work on is uppin the vocab a lil bit but this was a good piece
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thanx man, uppin
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uppin
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