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^6 aite..coo man u can give a good 2 cents an a vote
but that Dik ryder is a faggat.. no beef at u came hard..but he dont even no wut a mulit is.. hows he gunna say there aint any..wtf..is that uppin |
flow = none (sry, i jes cudnt catch yall flows)
structure = none( i think both of u need to cut ur lines shorter) punches = narcotics creativity = narcotics metas = at wordplay = narcotics vote = narcotics was feelin his spit more hit this battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93087 |
RESPONSE
wont poll cuz a.t. said he didnt want a poll but since i am gettin auch a big fuss im here to clear it up opena::A.T. closa::A.T. punches::A.T. personals::A.T. multis::TIE (wasnt really feelin eithas) creativity::A.T. structure::TIE flow::EEEEH A.T. VOTE:: A.T. maybe one lil tid bit of info will change yo opinion of dicc ridin and dat i dont know what a multi is.....maybe you got that opinion cuz you had yo boy meezy05 send me im'z sayin he was an admin and moderator....and o yea all admin were informe dof this and so was therealist....THE REAL moderator here.....thanku |
UPPIN...
yall quit bitchin... .................................................. ..... |
Punches: Nar
Flow: Tie (Both sucked) Metas: A.T. Wordplay: Nar Creativity: Nar Personals: Tie Overall: Nar hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93075 |
This battle was pretty one sided, fa' real.
AT: You had some decent lines, " "Narcotics" could never be a "dope" mcee, so in other words "Dope" isnt really a "narcotic", I've been ill with the "lyrical flu" lately , and "explaining this punch" is the only way that "he caught it"," and this line was a good hit: "But even if his "mother was nature" and his "father was fate" he still couldnt parody "destinys child"," and good close: "Even if this cat showed up with "multiple aliases"... he still couldnt beat me wit "threes company"..." Narcotics: You had a dope verse here~ ashy? wut im battlyin a femcee now, stop the votes this is proposturis.. no time to stop this, even if it takes all day i got more patience then doctors.. (<-Tough ass opener) lets just begin-spittin an statin facts that your in the wrong Weight look at ya health this cat gets recog-niton by postin, u cudnt be Heavy if u tryed to constipate..ya self (<-hella nice snap-thought the same myself) fuka blind spit try to match wits when i speak cuz its hopeless.. only time u try to conentrate is starin at O j carton full focused.. u spittin dope shit is like the raiders makin the playoffs..(LMAAAO) if u think u had a chance at this battle wit that verse your way off.. (<-aight) r u sure u aint a lite weight,cuz ya punches r sorta mediocore.. u beatin me is like a fag winning a game in strate poker..(<-LMAO) when u stepin to me u better be ready,if your tryna attempt me.. this battles gettin heated but no need for the sweat band r u really that sweaty?(AVY)(<-again, tight ass snap) damn white boy wut u think u facin.dont ever try to compaire ill.. cuz ill leave ya in a head ache state of mind after fallin out ya dads computer chair.. yea. my punches knock out Femcees cuz men contain power.. damn kid u new u wuz up aginst skill thats why u posted the due time in a hour.. leave ya flow devoured cuz your comin up killed.. you remind me of my self when i wasnt this Ill let my rhymes teach ya lessons, so u mite spit tite.. damn still no sighn of this fag r u sure it aint past ya bed time.. Tha rest, I really doesn't need an explanation, fa' sho. Only a couple lines from AT stuck, but wit' Narcotics' verse? There were no lines wasted. open:Narcotics close:Narcotics punches:Nartotics creativity:Narcotics structure:TIE flow:Narcotics Like I said, this was a pretty one sided battle... Vote: Narcotics |
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Ayo- ya'll hit this up wit' a fair vote ~n~ some true input -workin' to el-e-vate! |
PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE FOR ME VOTING HERE!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93272 === A.T. - - kinda weak start... too long too - flow is bad. too many words. needs to be simplified - swoosh lines are played out... I've been ill with the "lyrical flu" lately , and "explaining this punch" is the only way that "he caught it", ^^^ not good metaphor at all. sorry man. - not bad ending. dude you need a lot of work on your structure. i would like to see you rap that verse to a beat without fukking up!!! lol Narcotics- - great opener... more patients then doctors!!! nice - good disses. structure is great here too... i can actually read this to a beat - LOL nice swet band diss!!! - nice computer chair diss - okay ender... its clear who won here. |
uh... I was wearing a visor... not a sweat band lmao...
anyways... thanks for voting... Still Uppin... ~AshY~ |
^^^ it looks like a sweat band cuz the bills in teh back
dont matter tho..i think i took this one.... good battle kid.. uppin to get it over wit |
opener: narcotics
closer: AT flow: narcotics punches: AT structure: tie wordplay: AT enjoyment: AT AT just had mad wordplay in there plus everything so that really did it for me, only thing i didnt like was that i felt the lines were kinda stretched so the flow was a little off beat...but u can never really tell in text.. Narcotics also had an ill verse but lacked the line by line by line by line wordplay that AT spit. nice battle. hit this up both a yall please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93693 |
my_vote: AT
haha forgot the most important part.... anyways hit that up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93693 |
flow:=...quit stretching
disses:At punches:narc vocab:= complexity:narc Vote:.....narc return da honest vote http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0046#post930046 |
how doe JEGo see that AT TOOK THIS read my shit kid
damn..... uppin for non dik rydin fagats to post a vote |
ooohhh nice battle ya'll..both came long and hard..ewwww
Breakdown- punches-nar flow=both structure-both enjoyment-nar metas-nar creativity-a.t personals..lacked hard ones opener-nar finisher-hard to choose vote-nar did come harder than ashy pz |
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