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Emerge 11-24-03 01:16 PM

/\/\ send me a link with a battle against someone decent and we will see what up ait?


anyway uppin for more feed

Token 11-24-03 02:14 PM

I Thought the structure had no errors... Vocab was good... flowed well... definetly a good read... nice topic as well... keep them coming.

MythikuL 11-24-03 10:50 PM

IGHT....ILL BREAK IT 4 YA

FLOW....8/10 LIKED UR FLOW...COULD HAVE UP'D IN A FEW SPOTS BUT OVERALL GOOD...

structure..was jus fine..

WORDPLAY...made this piece a lot better i think...can improve..but its good...

topic....4 ur first open mic was original...so propz there..

VOCAB...was good ...glad u didnt push it 2 the "WAT THE FUCK HE TRYIN 2 SAY" point...i hate that throws a piece...

OVERALL..like ya said u have improvements..here and there....mabe up ur intensity......but all 2gether..a well put piece...well writtin....

GOOD LOOKIN PIECE...

SPECIALLY 4 THE 1ST...

PROPZ

U KEEP WRITIN

ILL KEEP READIN AND FEEDIN 4 YA KID...

PEACE

[-!F.A.T!-] 11-24-03 10:53 PM

nice kid i was feelin this ncie flow it was real deep to deff feelin this piece nice drop man

Emerge 11-24-03 11:14 PM

appreciated please more feedback with depth
thanks peace

KeMy$t 11-25-03 12:25 AM

yo this was a phat drop dude everythin was off the hook like completely but ya dude i dont know wat else to say except this shit was dope

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94198

hit this up if u could

Emerge 11-25-03 08:31 PM

upp

Emerge 11-26-03 02:58 AM

uppin fuck man!

Trah Siph 11-26-03 05:55 AM

good bruv.....good shit....Is that herbal????????????


8/10 bruv

Emerge 11-26-03 01:29 PM

thanks for the feedback....you could have critiqued i though

isane lyricist 12-06-03 05:23 PM

good vocab and flow
lots of imagery on this piece which i thought it was real dope
good job emerge

High Class 12-06-03 06:21 PM

I thought this was pretty good hommie. I like the usage of the vocab, you played that real nice. It was an alright flow. The rhyme scheme was straight. I would have liked it to be longer, ya know. Nice drop hommie, be sure to peep my rap im about to put up, aight...

8 / 10 ...For A small write...

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion


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