shit that was tight, excellent vocab bbro. keep doin ur shit.

peace

good use of vocab, shit flowed,overall good drop

Thanks...

hot shit man... nice flow

Uppin...

this was a great piece, it really came across an ryhmed nicely great vocab....nothin really to change...great work keep it up

i really like dis shit dawg.good vocab.good flow.keep dat shit up mane.

yeah I agree with everybody else on this...the barz were a little long...but it's all good as long as the flow is on point...as yourz was...and ya vocab was also nice...now holla back at my open mic called "Remember Me??????"

alrite, could use some more multis in my opinon
7/10

Anyone else?

hmmm...

flow-i disagree with people saying the bars are stretched...thats how i write and my shit flows great in my head...only u can know how to flow with it....people read and dont flow..whatever...throw in some more multi's but dont make em too complicated or basic....seems like u used some here just too enhance the vocab......

concept- eh....aight....i guess....if there's shit i didnt catch tell me...but i couldnt put the wholle piece together as a whole....just me though....

lyrically- aight...coulda been more creative with imagery and multis....it was nice with complexity though....keep it up

overall i give it like a 6 outta 10...for now...

can u please reply with ^^lengthy critique to my open mic ..check the sig...thanx...

good shit man! nice vocab. i like how it flowed!

damn you was HOT dawg
nice stuff
good everything
shit
uuuummmm like wow...um i don't wat say jus keep it up and try some out side stuff
get of this site do sumthin



peace

your flow is jus wicked men!!!! excellent vocab.....u is a guy with some dangerous and intellectually wicked stuff in ya head, you structure your lines perfectly too...

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