yo dez got this shit nukka, pm me for a battle some time, i'll take you on, and for 1liner, go back to normal frontlines your aint a competator yet............................................... ..

shit i think i need to write more, or my server is fuckin up again, if my vote doesn't go through i'm sorry, mabie a mod will put it in there, yet again, my vote goes to dez..................................
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ok, here it is:

DEZ

kid thinks hes got dope wordplay... well, i'm not sold
watch me crack his fungus..to prove i break the mold
^^^ aight, more wordplay than punch here 7/10
L's like a post 9/11 dealership.....offering 0% interest
9-15 isnt just a record, its also his average bench press!
^^^nice, decent punch, original 8/10
'gainst Dez hes always less...... like a pint to a gallon
what good'll your e-guns do? i wear an i-vest when im battlin
^^^so-so....creative 6/10
kid your joke, he who says otherwise is nothing but a liar
new-b posts never even have half a dope punch..
theyre all wack..especially the 1liners
^^^broke structure here, decent punch though 7/10

TOTAL: 28/40 (70%)

and.... 1LINER

You could Have a million actors trapped in ya ass~ and stuffed in ya glands
but thats the only way your Raps~ could ever be backed by a popular demand
^^^nice opener, decent punch 8/10
i'm Grab"n a preist to Bless me Right--- so i can grab all ya D/r's and turn there necks RIGHT
so all you got LEFT is the THEFT that would immediatly ~Supress ya Hype''
^^^ok, meaning is questionable, trying too hard here... 5/10
like a glock with out tha light--u could obses me for life
u could copy and spit every word i speack ~twice~and evey breath i breathe~~ and still not do it right
^^^weak punch, learn how to spell dog: speak, every 5/10
You aint evil or see though SO U COULD NEVER Posses these EYES
AND THATS WHY as u predictid ur only gunna be a Texcee for LIFE
^^^ weak punch 6/10 1st line was stupid
You could neva Break this or~Stop-This-Hammer-
from leaveN you face-less --shot in ya grammar --and show u the tru meanin of Race-ist Prop-a-gan-da
whats race gotta do with it? eh.... 5/10

TOTAL: 28/50 (56%) work on structure, but you got potential

vote goes to dez

peace

Dez easily wins..First, you could tell he aint try, and why even try, the other kid seriously needs help with his battle. I ain't seen a sretched bar verse since I was in B.R.E
Vote-Dez