Nah nigga, for real. I aint tryin' to bitch about it or nothing, but atleast break it down. Thanks.

upin4
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meant 2 say smack u upside ya left cheek, last line

explaination...............................
punches-ape
personals-tie
opener-ape
closer-ape
flow-ape..............bill's stretched....hella
creativity-ape
overall-ape

--------------bill work on shortening you're lines..........you need elevation

peace

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uppin4 you turd burglers
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that was gay^junio

imean uppin 5 ass tore up
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ape came harder and had better punches. his was also way eaiser to read. i liked his flow and structure. bill had a nicne flow to. vocab=tie.

overal vote=ape

return favour, drop an honest vote!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92962

Ape you had 2 good lines the rest were shite
Bill it's time to stop taking the drugs or grow up about ten years I dunno
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ape murked him wit harder punches........

myvote - ape

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that vote shoudent count envy skills is a horse fucker
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yeah he got it wit punches...typical

hahaha just kidding
bill is a fucken duce bag
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