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Opener: Yung
Closer: Yung Flow: Bay (Yungs was wack as fuck) Personals: Bay Punches: Yung What was that shit Yung? Your lucky you were battlin a herb or you woulda got raped. No hat, jus a vote |
if those are overplayed...then your's have already been retired.... locked up...and trashed from overuse.....
Lets vote now....no more freeposting............ |
Haha its one of my weakest verses I wasnt payin no attention to it
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lol.. i figured this site had more respect for undressed verses... so give me a rematch... and you can bet that it will be quite different... if maybe i add some dashes and """"" to it...lmfao...too sorry....just too sorry.
So rematch? due tonight? |
Lets let this finish firs then we will talk bout it ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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uhh, let's see...let me break this up a lil
opener--- Yung Punch's--- No one Flow--- {I don't like votin' this cuz U really can't tell unless U hear'em spit tha fuckin' verse but,} I was feelin' Yung more. Personals--- eehh, SiCcC finish--- Yung ( that 'X' line... no) Overall--- Yung takes it Yung next time U vote, explain yo'self a lil' more. |
pretty nice battle from both of u....Bay had some nice wordplay...but it was all kinda old....Yung also had the same....but he had a lil' more originality and better flow in this verse...plus this line was pretty tight...
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that was a pretty good winning line there....other than that...u two were pretty even all throughout....Bay had a better structure...but i think Yung had more "updated" wordplay...nice shit from u both...good read...no hate...just a vote... peace 4:20 |
bay sicc had elementary punches...nothin really stood out..disses were iight..nothin creative...closer was terrible and did'nt rhyme...
yh was iight..betta punches..horrible structure tho..disses hit ok..opener and closer did'nt have any heat ...overall you came betta tho vote yh |
young wrecka merked him with ill multis and harder hits. elevate bay. you had some potentially good shit in there, but the wack shit just stuck out for me.
vote: yung |
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