aiight koo good votes and can yall please tell me what i need to improve so i can work on that becuz i will be working on sumthing that i'm good at and i'll get all mixed up you know

hey ya'll thanx for the honesty,,,,,, lets get some more votes in here aiiight? ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

yeah dawg lol u winnin sall good though...................waitin for ur ass to get online............................................ ...................................

haha wud up man, ya im just checkin in to see how its poppin, u battle any1 else tonite?,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

come on lets get some votes in here so we can close this battle....... holla at me,,,,,,,,,,,,,, peace

c-lo you are fucking weak want a rematch bitch my vote goes to C rocka just because he has a better name

ICU MAN U WHACK AS SHIT, haha i beat ur ass before u Bitin bitch..... itd be embarrasin to battle u again.... where u gonna copy ur shit from this time??

aiight thanx ya'll that voted how about we finish this shit up.... drop a few more its appreciated playa..... holla..............

aiight can we get some votes shit,,,,,, 3 -5 more and its done and we can close this shit somebody holla at me,,,,,,,,,,

hey i need 2 get some votes in here...... holllllaaaaaaaaaaaa at me,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

C-Lo took this

vocab - c-lo
wordplay - c-lo
rhyme scheme - c-lo
structure - c rocka
creativity - none
metaphors - none
punchlines - c rocka

this wuz a weak battle, but ima have to go wit' c-lo.

phayme good lookin out, ill work on it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, thanx for the vote................. couple more will close this biaaatch,,,,,,, holla

this battles gettin slept on, i need 2 votes drop em.......... peace,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

come on shit, just drop 2 votes so i can get this bitch closed,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, i appreciate it

yo come on we need 2 more votes in this battle and its over with, some1 holla fo sho so we can close this,,,, thanx,,,,, one