Dope piece.....the rhyme structure was rather simple but yet it was effective......seemed to tell two different stories and then merge into one ultimate meaning......

I don't know...I read it like that......

Just work on your diction.....though you have a grasp on writing well with rhythm and such...you could have used better words to make the meaning hit much, much harder......

^It was originally meant to be one for every month but I don't think anyone would read that much. . Each homeless person born. . But notice how there aren't any names mentioned. . Blah. . it takes forever to explain but you get the idea. .