I liked Ape's structure better than Diverse's. I think that it conveyed the passage of time better first of all, and second of all as everyone else noted actaully had a strong ended.

Repay the vote if you don't mind man, i have a few sleeping battles.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=95069

and also

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95433

^^^Ahha. Uppin'!!!

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anyone wanna vote on the dreamer vs. diverse battle? it only needs a couple more votes...it would be greatly appreciated...i'll vote on a lot of battles...as soon as i reach 100 posts

this battle goes to ape i liked his ending alot better and visuals i got as i read his shit was spine tingling and shit ...Diverse nice drop/...name....your visuals were hardcore but you gotta play on the feelings of the crowd and never give up even its a hard topic...vote -ape