ive never rated or judged a topic before...but here it goes:

I give my vote to rhymes because he had a much better and easier to read verse..he actually went into the "topic' and explained everything clearly...rule you wrote your peice as if this were an actuall battle..you verse wasnt bad i just think you took this seriously..therefor rhymes get my vote...

no.hate...keep at it ya'll...good work by both..

arent you suppose to take it seriously?.lol.................................... .......................uppern for some votes

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yea you are supposed to take it serious but not the way you did...there was a topic givin there for you were supposed to rap about that topic..your verse was writted as if this wasnt a topical battle..thats what im trying to say....if you dont understand this...then dont battle topical...no hate

PZ

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I'll give this to Rule for a much better format...

(Kill the stretched shit, Rhymes)

He also takes the vocab.

Both came with sharp imagery and emotion.

Felt em both.

But Rule's was so much easier to read.

Vote: Rule

thanks BTK....uppen for some more votes............................................. .............................................

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rite, cant vote, but hopefully can soon.....a wud vote for rule....simply because a found his verse easier to read, as it was set out in a decent format.....

some nice wordplay in both, but rule took it only slightly in the wordplay....

overall = rule

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7902#post957902

ooppps.....really shud of done that on that ^^post^^ :S

yea the format and punches i have to give it to rule he edged it

i cant vote yet....got no 100 posts

but return favor

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...1635#post961635

damn....if you dont have 100 posts to poll vote dont post in here.............................................. ......

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rulle stole this yeah he got it all the way gj man yeah i liked it anyhow i dont care anymore about how im going to say thi.,......

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