NICE...
FRESH...
CLEANCUT...
SMOOTH SHIT...
MUCH POTENCIAL...
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thanks for the feedback every1 it was apreciated

beautiful poem, even though it was sad, it shone out with brilliance and creativity. every line had a message, every line was well thought out. great poem, with ure talent i dont think i even have to engarouge u to keep wrting, im pretty sure u know how much skill u got already. gotta say it again great poem.

thanks that means a lot pz