thanx^ peeps...much appreciation...
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thanx again....
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I liked part one and I liked part two...

I think your emotion showed more in the first one...

But this one definately had better vocab and complexity.

Plus, it made me want to hear part three, so...

Kudos, my man.

Except for the forced rhyme on "summit/commit", this was pretty near flawless.

8.75/10

Peace

thanx for the feedback bro^...much appreciation...
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can't forget bout this. im gonna start on the third one
soon..uppin
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LIKIN THIS PLAYER. THE STORY LINE IS TIGHT TO THE POINT. THEM BUTERFLIES ARE BAD WEN U TRYIN TO CHAT A MINT BIRD THAT U REALLY LIKE

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Nice flow to you shit, short and right to the point, good use of vocab and imagry with words..godd shit, decent shit maman

thanx man. i appreciate it.
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this was a good verse, so was the first one though, i liked the vocab in this it was really good, your descriptions on things i think were very well done, the lenght also was good, i think this is going tobe a good song once it is done... you going to put it in adio? it would probably sound good there but thats my 2 cents

great verses keep it up

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^thanx man. much appreciation....
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good drop...nice vocab and steady flow..good structure and it seemed like it had alot of emotion and feelings in it....great drop overall

9.5/10

return the favour and hit up my openmics in my sig...thanks

damn. im still working on the third verse. its hella hard.
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........i got like 2 lines for it so far....
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