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-   -   Slik Shadow vs Rap~Jesus~ (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=96735)

whitelightning 01-01-04 04:59 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by Rap~Jesus~
OPENER:

Yeah Thanks For Lettin Us Know..
Quote:
Originally posted by Rap~Jesus~
U called out ne1 wit a lot wins//
I got 5 now get ready to turn my 6th victim//

Recycled Punch. Everyone Uses This.
Quote:
Originally posted by Rap~Jesus~
Heating up:
I'll cracke u skull with my gun and leave ur brain Xposed//
Send to to da grave sowing no sympathy nor no remorse//

Heating Up...Yeah..Okay...Okay Punch.
Quote:
Originally posted by Rap~Jesus~
The way i'll burn this nigga my signature should be 666//
Ima make u famous-cause afta this battle i be the only reason niggas kno u exist//

Good Punch.
Quote:
Originally posted by Rap~Jesus~
Its 2000 plus-its must-fa cats that hear me bust-put on teflon earmuffs//
Enslave this nigga wit lines-shackled wit rhymes-like im spittin handcuffs//

First Line Sucked. 2nd Line decent punch.
Quote:
Originally posted by Rap~Jesus~
Finisher:
Don’t die on me dawg, I’m still not finished diggin’ ur grave//
Ur options are to sit and behave or spit and deprave//

Once Again..Thanks For Lettin Us Know This Was Your Finisher..Cause If You Didn't Tell Us..Yeah..Decent Closer. Nothin Special.

You Got Some Work To Do. Decent Verse..Your Structure Needs Some Work.

Quote:
Originally posted by Slik Shadow
Kids Forgotten, Like Bein on da Back of my mind but on da tip of my tungue
Catch dis biter by Track in ya Lines, Do ya Like Bullz in Rodeos and leave ya hung

Haha. Entertaining. Good Opener.
Quote:
Originally posted by Slik Shadow
Like Acids in da belly of da beast Burn this fruits cuz I be Increasingly drastic
Hes like Stop Bein so great, Cuz My Flow just stole da Show Like a Burgalin Actress

Not Too Bad. Slight Improvement From Last Punch.
Quote:
Originally posted by Slik Shadow
this kid comes weaker than fist in slowmo, almost 300 post 2 n he still has no struct
call his rap a bomb or dinomite,cuz like he did wit his otha 3 losses he got blown up

Solid.
Quote:
Originally posted by Slik Shadow
I got this kid Wishin I was in his Crew, How can u expect to beat me when ur terror clique dude
And dogg keep me outta ya flows, Im not tha one u write Suicide Notes 2

Iffy Closer. A Little Biting Perhaps..Nevertheless...This Closer doesn't affect the verdict.

Decent Verse. Seen Better.

Vote: Slik. Good Job.

.Iknoevel. 01-01-04 05:06 PM
^^ no in 8 mile he said

" Im sorry you have to be the one you commit suicide too"

not suicide notes

Slim Thug 01-01-04 05:15 PM
Opener: Tie (Both were decent)
Punches: Both hit about the same...(Tie)
Personals: Slik came harder with personals as they connected nicely
Structure: Tie (Jesus ur structure started wack and Slik ur lines were 2 long)
Flow: Slik's rhymed better (Ive never heard of 6 6 six and exist rhyming
Vocab: Tie
Closer: Slik

Well close battle in most catergories but Slik takes this ~

Ambitious 01-01-04 05:44 PM
wow.... rap jesus got merked....fix up ya structure friend......even out them lines.......punches def....slik....more creative then RJ....
metas and wordplay i also give to slik....much better.....Rj just needs to elevate.....in all aspects

vote - SS


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