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METERS
Ready to thrust a knife through ya chest, until it's compressed/ Carve ya up and digest all of ya bars until i get a cardiac arrest/ ^^^LAME...NOTHING PUNCHING HERE DAWG... I'm kinda lika a tumar on ya chest, 'cuz ya really should be aware of me/ and also because i embarass ya skin so crimson bitches think you're a cherokee/ ^^^EH...NOT MUCH OF A PUNCHLINE... My rhymes focus to unleash the plague of locusts on Soft Focus/ Ya rhymes are as intelligent as first born, so I strike 'em down like Moses/ ^^^STRIKE EM DOWN LIKE MOSES?...WHO DID MOSES STRIKE DOWN?... Can't resist the urge to physically make you a man of few words/ In other words, i'm gonna bury the hatchet and leave our problems minced in thirds/ ^^^EH...WASN'T FEELIN IT... You can't come hard in the battle, but even worse is in ya sex life you can't cum at all/ 'cuz ya structure is as flimsy as ya soft cock but unlike ya streched lines it's a little more small/ ^^^THIS WAS A GAY LINE RIGHT HERE...TALKIN BOUT YOUR COCK... My rhymes dice ya creating gills, cast my line into the ocean and snagged ya skills/ Realize that the 'depth might be more defining than me,' but does the depth write wills?/ ^^^EH...NOTHING HERE... Thrust bitch,i wish you would have heard that to battle Meters is to know a veil/ (no avail) Punched ya lighs out so many times had to confirm ya of your loss in braille/ ^^^EH...CONCEPT WAS LAME... Your punches are dumber than a box of rocks, like a Talaban ya throwin' 'em at me/ Elevate my friend, start throwing twigs, atleast than your rhymes will be snappy/ ^^^HA...THIS WAS DECENT... THRUST... Ur bound to Expload, Just watch as i Bomb your avy, Just another smoked herb.. That doesn't satisfy my cravings, ^^^EH...NOTHING HERE... I really do...Pitty this fool, Consider me Mr. T... Cuz I wreck meters down the middle...like c-o-l-l-e-c-t, ^^^YOU RHYMED t WITH T...LAME DAWG... Wow your somethin special, U learned to bite rhymes, If you were Worth something...then i'd be droppin Dimes, ^^^EH...PUNCH WAS SOFT AS WET SH!T... I'll mount this kill on my wall, Another headless Bum, I'd put you on a plaque...But you are a No one, ^^^WACK...NOTHING ELSE TO CALL IT... I just school you kid...Yet, You don't have any Class, Ur fucked bitch...Like my las peice of Ass ^^^PLAYED...PEOPLE SAID THIS BACK IN THE 80's Ur a true playboy...Servin my Beef on Roller Blades... But even wit 8 wheels...Meters isn't safe ^^^EH...COULD HAVE BEEN KINDOF NICE WITH A DIFFERENT SET UP... Meter's next move is goin to be Control Alt Delete, Cuz i sent him upstairs...Hiding under his sheets ^^^HA...NOTHING PUNCHING AT ALL... __________________ THIS WAS A WEAK BATTLE VOTE=THRUST...cuz he didnt use a gay cock or cum line... |
Thank you for your breakdown. Even if you can't comprehend anything.....at all. Anyway, does anyone else want to vote? 3-8 more people?
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nice battle right here
i really liked the punchilnes from thrust but meters had ill set ups and punchlines he had some tight metaphors in there flow was almost even but thrust got it by an edge if i could vote i would go to meters |
Upping for some votes......votes would be nice.
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hey yo as of now im polling the vote i made in a previous post on here so can yall vote on the battle in my sig against rapture we need to close that shit...
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upping...fourth time i think? who knows anymore..
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last upping.....vote please! voting's fun...i swear. : \
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aiight....
Thrust:not bad punch's were aiight coulda been better but oh well,flow wus aiight,structure wasnt bad,overall it wus aiight come harder next time!! Punch's-6/10 Meta's-6/10 Multi's-6/10 Wordplay-7/10 Structure=-7/10 Overall-32/50 Ok Now Meters:NIce verse,i was feelin da flow,wordplay wus good!....Punch's were nice,overall nice verse!! Punch's-7/10 Multi's-7/10 Meta's-7/10 Wordplay-8/10 Structure-8/10 Overall-37/50 Vote:Meters Reason:Verse wus better den Thrust!!.....nice battle meters!!,,,,,as for thrust elevate!! |
Yo, hit this up and I'ma be back to return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97378 |
yo can't poll it but meters won this shit...
nice multis and wordplay...some of your shit really didn't make all that much sense but for the most part you stayed on course i am proud of you..... good battle meters wins with a more veteran structure wordplay and a host of multis.. |
nice battle
i thought that thrust had some good hits metters seemed like just stretched lines but also had some good shit in thier to over all i think meters had this battle good battle |
not a bad battle but cudda been betta--
BREAKDOWN- Punches-Met Sustainment-Met Flow-Th Struc'-Th Metas-Met Overall-Met.. jus a nicer and harder verse BUT improve ya structure Meters MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98331 |
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