Thanks alot hommie. You are funny as hell. Yea, I sent this to my Baby. I will tell you what she thinks of it through PM tommorow... Thanks alot hommies for the replies. It means alot to here your opinions. UPPIN

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

yo i liked this chyper as well keep up wit da the hot stuff homie


score 9.4 of 10

I felt that your rhyme was flawless. It kept my attention and I could relate to what you were saying. Your best works always come from the heart. I think you got some skills, fo real. If you do have some audio, I would luv to hear it man. Keep writin'....hit me up

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/s...sinficmusic.htm

Aight hommie,
Im supposed to be hitten the studio this summer. Gotta conection with a hommie in northern florida. But thanks alot hommies. I probably will use these lyrics for a track on my intro. CD for the underground. UPPIN for more replies...

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

This was dope dawg.
We got some competition now between us coz I'm droppin 'Love you,Hate you' tonite.
Flow was perfect, so was vocab and structure but coz everythin can be improved I'll give it 9/10.
Well done

aiight
the hook
The first 2 lines were a good set up for a hook.
Though in stead of house to house, you could of put heart or someht ing else.
hoo 6/10

1st verse
Our lips went from across the school yard, to close inches
great line
ok it was an aiight verse some nice immagery and some aiight vocab and wordplay.

Highest on my scale of ricter, we were stuck like stickers
this was one of the weaker lines in the song, but it was a good concept

overall verse 7.5/10



2cnd verse
You touch me with words, that ive only read in the Bible
Our love will go bridle, with-out you, im known as suicidle
probably your worst line[/b]
again it was a nice verse, with some good wordplay, nice immagery, but it could of been made better.
[i]overall 7/10



3rd verse
your best verse too many quoteables in this one.
the best wordplay, immangery was in this verse.
overall 9/10



i wasnt being harsh i was only commenting mainly on the bad things so it can help you elevate. it was a good drop, and you have some talent, but it seems that if you would of took your time, (i do this) and not rushed it instead.



[b]overall[b/]8/10

aiight
keep it up

peace

Aight hommie, Thats straight. I grade people the same way, just gotta point everything out to them. Thanks for breaking it down like that, much appriciated. UPPIN POSSABLY...

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

shit dawg i wanna hear this on audio.
fucking quality here.
good wordplay, structure, multis, similes, and flow.
overall 9/10(cause nothing is perfect but very near).
thnx for the reply.

No problem hommie... I think this thread is probably done...
But here is my last effort, UPPIN

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

dope drop...see dis is why you in DOI...keep it up dawg..I give you 8.5/10 for this drop...

now you gotta keep elevatin and get into legends...

yo bro ...emotional sciptures wit al time mixtures...i must say its GReat which may turn u into a fag but im not bein slack cuz tis is just part of the comments....so dont be mad its a contribution 2 ur rhymin rap...haha

LOL, You just sounded very stupid hommie... But whatever. Thanks for checkin this out for me lightning. UPPIN

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

Highclass that was a great peice i enjoyed reading it. so i read it over and over again 3 to 4 times.. this was reeaaally good hommie..dont ever give up you got hella talent..10/10

Hott tracc!!.....nice topic,flow wus good n on point!!....wordplay very nice keep dat up!!.....good structure......look jus put it dis way shyt wus a job well done n dats all dat matters!!......keep it up playa!!.....~1~

Bringing this back, anyone think that this belongs as a legendary rap... I wanna see if anyone would vote on a person not very none yet... so...
UPPIN