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Vote=5hifty
better punches that hit way harder...........yo that verse was dope.....................that was a nice battle yo |
good battle here. i liked it cuz it had to differen styles....both of their structures were pretty fucked up.............but 13 got it together after the beginnin, i just cant feel the verse 5hifty when its like a paragraph.....flow was almost even....13's lines were a little too long i think....
5's punches hit hard....but 13's punches hit hard and had wordplay..... i think i'd give it to 13 if i could vote |
yo 13 your shit waz to komplex man, like if u were to spit dat ova a mik people wouda been lost, but all in all u did have good wordplay.... but 5hift kuz, u got strait to da point and your rite dat waz a merkin verse fo sho...my vote=5hift... keep it krakin yo.
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Damn this mother really did break it down to a T |
Yea man 13, dat was wayyyy too complex lol. Like no offense man, but dis aint "NASA freestyle battles". Dont mean 2 diss ya der but stressin the point. 5hifty, i did expect more from ya but u put out enough to earn urself my vote.
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i wouldn't say 5hifty murdered XiiV...but he did have a much better structure, flow, and punches....XiiV u battle like a head from HHD...it don't work here.....u had some senseless wordplay....for example...
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BREAKDOWN Multis - XiiV Metas - Tie (XiiV had some senseless ones) Wordplay - Tie (same as above) Personals - Neither (none of u threw a direct punch) Punches - 5hifty (hit harder and made more sense) Vocab - XiiV Flow - 5hifty Creativity - Tie Complexity - XiiV Structure - 5hifty RhymeScheme - 5hifty Overall - 5hifty only gets this because XiiV had some pointless lines and forced wordplay...don't get me wrong...some of them were tight....but 5hifty had a more understandable and harder approach....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote... peace 4:20 |
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