This shit was tight. Good flow and not bad vocab. Liked they story line alot. Keep droppin

Yo ... this peice was strait maddness fa sho kid... everythang was there... ya flow fell off once or twice... but disregard this down puts this was a good ass piece... everythang was there
i was feeling the topic an the way it keep you on focus of the whole peace... you killed it... good mic...

And never quit elevating...on3

it was really good. some parts didnt ryme but I think youve got a future in free style

^ some parts didn't rhyme? :S

anyways, thanks for all the support dudes..... it made my day opening this and finding out that all of you enjoyed reading my piece... so thanks again, and i seriously appreciate it

vocab needs work but it was tight

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nice shit dawg

DAmn son. I can really relate to that shit. not a thing is wrong wit it. Its perfect. kepp it up man you'll be big. MAke it to the top and take over the game. Your shits inspiring man. I really hope to see you live someday.

^ lol!

thanks for the positive feed back...

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Very nice drop...interesting piece. Very Consistant flow and good use of multis...ok vocab but could have been better.

i say 8/10

nice drop...keep em commin