guns
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liked the opener....real nice :)

had good flow n all the punches really hit down.

Profit
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to be honest, all your lines were far too long....and the layout was all 'ergh'

wud of been good apart from that!

keep it up u guys

vote = Gunz

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I can't poll but at least I can comment and up your thread: Vote GunShotz--

i agree with ~Rythmic Hints~ Gunshot had a more streamline (yet simple) flow. His punches were ok. MCProfit went around the world to get his point accross. don't get me wrong I'm not a fan of the simple meta/ punch, meta/punch stlyle. But the structure of the flow was not dynamic enough and didn't really climax. I'm not hateing and don't d/r but that's my call.

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