'Gazeebo, no offence man but ur punchlines are played out, the fertilizer thing, and the momma telephone number. Just work on ur punchlines, and i think u'll b better. Just my opinion.'

a feel the same way dawg, thanks for saving me the typin

vote = poetic

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97113

uppin (4)....sleepers......post a link, I'll leave honest feed back....oh yeah...good battle gazeebo

Poetic took this with a tighter format, better wordplay, some cool multi's, and punches that hit just a bit harder...

Gazeebo was pretty good, but propped himself a bit and used a threat or two that didn't add up to punches.
(The "scales" line was funny as shit, though, props!)

Close battle, but for more brought to the table, Poetic.

uppin (5)....come on ya'll...two more votes and this is finished...end this~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

poetic took this all round...MERKIN...

vote-poetic

no more 2 say!!!!!!!!1...................................... ..