nice shit dawg

/\should be banned...reply with better feed you piece of fucking shit

this was a well structered piece had nice wordplay and some creative thoughts, the flow was alright i liked the topic...good read

you forgot to poll vote on my battle...can you hit it up weith it thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=3

thanks...done

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well I can't really say much for the topic it din't really grasp my interest as much as I thought it would but anyways. your flow was a lil bit choppy to me it seemed it was fell of juss a lil bit but nuttin big. you had good vocab and a really good structure and nice multi's and u had a good rhyme scheme and some decent wordplay. overall nice piece bro. keep up. peace.

u had nice multis and it flowed nicely
ur vocab was good and your structure
ok wordplay
keep droppin!
8.5/10

intresting and unusual thats what i like about it. keep it up

your the worst fucka emcee ever...worst piece..









































lol just playin

This was very good...Vocab was strong and the imagery was pretty good...best line

One last breath I take...as I inflate my chest...heaving
I blindly and wildly attack so fiercely...I aint believing

Good job dawg..

8/10.

Yeah this was a pretty good drop here i thought....your structure was good in this, like it always is....your vocab was good as well....Flow in this was alright, stayed on point through out it, kinda lost me at a few points though but nothing real big...You had some good multies....overall good drop....keep at it.

Flow wuz nice, Part of the verse didnt really fit the ending , decent wordplay, Keep spittin tho the flow wuz nice most of the way. thanks for the look.