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another good collab west.
nice imagry, multis, structure and wordplay. flow was there for me. the first verse i thought was the better out of the two. dope piece dawg. 8/10 |
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edicius shone in this piece.. I think your lines were a bit stretched, but your inner multis really helped it flow.. if you had multis at the end of your lines aswell it would've of been near perfection.. seriously.. The content from both was good enough to keep my interest.. Good job both of you..
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^Fuck u hoe it wsnt stretched = (
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Damn dawg, shits blazin...i love this new style of yours, you've decreased your bar length and it's came out tops..the flow has improved beacause of that...you had dope rhyme scheme and mad internals, vocab was immaculate as usual...loved the imagry you portrayed here....damn! Edicius your style has also been adjusted (i think)... you have alot more internals and you manipulated words..screwed them about which was off-the-chain. Real gritty emotion here (from both parties), you too portrayed a ill fearful image...the wordplay you used was a nice addition too...tight. 4/5..nuttin bad to say about it..keep this shit up, shit was blazin. |
^Thanks .. m8
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