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Lulong 12-14-03 05:23 AM

feedback
 
descent drop i thought 13th Apostle had the best verse, overall tho good vocab and structure, good piece. If ya could return da fav and drop some feed on one of my pieces on my sig i would appreciate it, thx

The 13th Apostle 12-14-03 12:54 PM

EZ...set that idea up in the crew thread, and we'll get shit craccin

Thanks for the replies everyone, the love is most def felt through-out the whole AI crew.

Keep the good replies coming, and we'll keep the sick collabs coming.

P.e.a.c.e.

MeNTiLL 12-15-03 06:39 PM

Word ... Replies are greatly appreciated ... Uppin' one last time ... Peace

deacon 12-15-03 07:13 PM

Very nice topical collab guys i really enjoyed each read...Somemore sedistic than others and some sweet and soft...hahah in a good way..you all complimented each others talent i just want to make that note...keep it up and ill keep readin\


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The 13th Apostle 12-18-03 09:52 AM

Level

WhiteRhymes 12-19-03 12:30 AM

good shit... but there was a few spots that i felt would b a lil sketchy when you spit it... keep up at it

Crysis 12-22-03 12:08 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by LikeWise
Love Is A Fading Thing...An Angel Can Only Do So Much
Love Count Is Always Dropping..Without An Arrow's Touch

Tight

But I'll stay Im not leavin', There's so many things I haven't seen
It's juss, Forever seems too long to wait for feathered wings
I could never bring, A crows when my tears stick around
And Im cryin' so often now, It feels like my heads in a cloud

Illness...Especially the last line and the second one..I see Aesop isquoted in mentill's sig..The seconsd and the third guy gave me kind of an aesop feeling..Tight shit..The first guy kind of slacked back from the others but none the less made a god effort to keep up and had some tight lines..My fav. verse was mentills..You killed it on the last four lines..Beautiful ending..Shame this only has 6 replies..Very good drop..


All i ever wanted was to pick apart the days, put the pieces back togtether my way -Aesop...Word...

1ne



bitch you stole my alias and now im going to KILL YOU! YOU STINK!


anyways nice drop you guys keep up the good work


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