ite nothing to special,

but ap got this with,

punches(just better),
personals(try to include more)
structure,
opener(i liked that.lol)


op work on your structure and also punches.

..hit this with an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98490 ....thx...........pz

lmfao......
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keep it up people just 3 votes .........................dun miss out .................................................. ......................seeeeeeennnn................ .....

applyed wins mwah de vote of dis nigga











































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plz finish voting on this one breadrins...thanx................................. ....................................
peace...