uppen
thanks for the feed

ya had a good flow... and your structure was good...
I liked this line... I thought it was mad tight...

"The year is changing like the baby who was born in december
Gods cryin rain to wash up snow another season to remember"

^^ill as fuck... mad props on this shit mang...
Ima keep peepin your drops... mad impressive peice...
~AshY~

thanks for the replies...keep em comen

uppen for some responces

i liked this man this was tite. good structure and flow. nice use of vocab. keep this shit up man!!!

ma fav rymes was prolly this one but i liek them all ya got mad skill!!!

From the smallest insect to the largest bear summers majestic
With a symphany of sounds in the morning leaving us goin hectic

******Yo... This was the 2nd best text drop I've seen.... Absolutely perfect flow on this piece, and great word choice...

High level of originality made this piece a nice edition to this forum.... Great job on this piece...... A few detailed multies, and you will get closer to the 10 mark.... Great writing....

9.0/10