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Opening: Hmm Close right here but ima give it to BTK
Punches: Token Personals: Tie Flow: BTK Wordplay: Token Closing: Close but Token for the originality Good battle |
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flow-b2k punches-tie structure-b2k personals-tie creativity-token overall-b2k just! real close but i think b2k got this 4 an all over beta verse! |
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Punches: Token Flow: B2K Creativity: Token Vocab: Token Enjoyment: Token Opener: Token Closer: Token Personals: B2K Really close shi', dawgz...fo real, I enjoyed this shi' alot....fuckin' close, buit Token won it by jus a pubic hair...anyway, good fuckin' battle... Hit this up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99213 Overall: |
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Re: Tökën (Executives) Vs. Born To Kill (Murderous Methods) (300 posts to vote)
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^i'm going to assume that you mean a line by line breakdown...and if so, then none of the previous votes should have counted...but here ya go... All scores out of 10 Born- Tha lead Exec is here ta suck my dick and taste my game... But, Toke you've been there before so it should taste the same.* bad opener....5 Ya soft and fake, couldn't rap tha truth if I notarized ya tongue... So I'll drown ya in molten metal, so can come hard with iron lungs. first line ok...second line pretty good but you lost points cuz it was pretty stretched...7 That'd be an improvement, cuz ya skills are shot after being beat... Kid, you could make a deal with tha devil, and still not spit heat. cmon man.....played...5 You and ya crew, tensed senses that can never unwind... Gimped too, a perfect example of tha blind leading tha blind. eh...this was pretty decent I guess..6 Twice beaten by Born, so ya ego's gotten up and taken flight... Shamed in front of ya peeps, like Saddam givin up without a fight. nice...but going to get played quickly....8.5 Total=31.5 aight Token- You'd think you starred on MTV the way your diss-missed I enscript hits poisen your liquor and you still dont spit sick hits very weak opener...played too...5 You're simply not s-killed.. Like Bruklor being de-modded I threw away your wack concepts but you just saved and caught it ok saw where you were going with the first line but wording was bad...second line was the same...good idea but horribly worded....5 You changed your name to Visa.. Just to get a little credit After this Win I'll have you takin anti-ginko just to forget it ok...this is better...7 Your verse couldn't be striking if your lines said thunder You didn't beat me kid.. Your occupation did.. It says Head Hunter ohhhh-damn....nearly everyone who's battled born has said something about headhunter.....but you flipped this nicely as hell....9.5 ..Are you gettin the point now Or shall I explain it farther.. ..You've been sonned so many times There's not even room for Darth Vader to claim father.. lmao...played but stil nice...8 Total=34.5 numbers don't lie so.... Vote=Token |
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