Nice.
Flow - On point
Vocab - coo
Emotion - tight
Imagery - nice

9/10

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Man that shit was deep yet still the way you put ya words together was gangsta. I like that about you thats why i posted in your crews tryout thread. keep it up

this was tight from the wordplay to the sctructure it was all good

Hell yeah mast c I liked the structure and the flow and you really got the point across to me!!!!! Vote in dis battle please homie:

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=100558

Ayo dunny this was hotter then a sunny day in Georgia ... This was nastier then newborns baby's dirty diaper... ya flow was hittin consistant like pretty boi floyd's punchs... i mean u hit it big like Brad Johnson Throwin it to Warren Sapp... you connected better like Cable over Dial up.... shyt was ill dunny

Keep doin it

Caesar On3

You got a lil skill. maybe we can collab.

You got a coo flo. I'mma give you some props for ya vocab and concept. You didn't drift from the topic and was potent wit ya lyrics.
You got potential. Keep up the talent and bless the mic.

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..Nice..your story-telling was 'awesome'..I don't want get all 'setimental',,but..is this from experience...???..LOL...nice work..