^^dope name.....lol

anywayz....this piece is truely dope....
the style is different but it works....
vocab and lyrics were tight and flow was nice....
this is clever cos itrelates to the picture in everyway and dus work with the picture.....
the way you described it, in poetry as well, was truely dope....
this is prolly' one of da best pieces i've read on rb....
maybe cos it wud b so difficult to write anything about da pic but wot u came up wit is mind blowin....

this is hall of fame shit.....

stay up playa.......................................peace

^ Haha .. you've never seen me write before ? Like .. a month ago i owned RB legends here ..

uikjyu

I liked how this turned out. It is somthing I like to read, it grabbed my attention real well. You had a consistant flow, it felt like a poem, but it stayed a flow to me. You put your words in the right places, good work on that. I liked what you did with this, it was a nice read hommie...

camarac is great ..
this piece just embraced that label ..
i will edit in a more detailed reply
later on .. =P .. actually i most likely
won't .. but you know it was good ..
your one of the greatest writers
online aside from some kids in rstl
and me .. but that changes piece to
piece .. good job man .

^ Exactly. That's why i joined up for the RSTL matey-o! I made top 40 last week, and ima be in the RSTL topical tag tourney, then when it gets back into a normal league, im gonna try pushing further up the league ranks - top 20 is what im aiming for.