uppin for votes one last time....

up up and aww fuck it...vote ya'll

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c'mon...ya'll

c'mon....... still uppin for votes it's been a fuckin' week..
c'mon....... still uppin for votes it's been a fuckin' week..
c'mon....... still uppin for votes it's been a fuckin' week..
c'mon....... still uppin for votes it's been a fuckin' week..
c'mon....... still uppin for votes it's been a fuckin' week..
c'mon....... still uppin for votes it's been a fuckin' week..

uppin again........................yo just vote


shit.damn't what the fuck....................

put this battle out of it's misery

breakdown..
personals...i don't really see any within wordplays verse...EX
punches...Wordplay had the harder punches cause you strectched yours out to much ex...
opener...wordplay beacause your stretched your shit again...
closer....i give this to wordplay too...i can't give you much cause yoru structure is so fucked ex good battle just fix your shit count syablles if neccesary...vote...word...peace..one..hit this up if you can vote it'll at least up it..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100678

yo i'll vote for wordplay on dis one...
wen reading it i flowd more with his verse rather than ex's.
quite close this battle..both need some uppin..i thought tha first bar of ex's woz quite weak..needs stronger punchs and some personals if u can find n e..wordplay i think u started off on a high then sunk a bit, keep working on ur rhymes

n e wayz

vote = wordplay

peace
-1-

opener:word
punches:word
personals:word
flow:word
structure:exception
multis:word

vote- wordplay

hit up the links in my sig...

nice battle verses from both cats...word..u did aight, but exception takes it...heres the breakdown



open:word
closer:Ex
punches:Ex
enetertainment:Ex
flow:word
structure: Ex
metas:none
multis:none