yo i kno what u mean by fuck god but it was jesus that died on the cross god is jesus's father lol ne way good job but yea i think u could choose a betta topic

every one has their own opinion, hurts me to read it but thats your choice not mine, anyway, it was a sorry drop, flow was sorry, if it was a poem, drop in poetic scriptures, it had good vocab, but thats it, lacked consistency...... 3/10 late

You little pussies need to shut the fuck up and quit preachin

i give you props for what you did but dawg on these street no matter how many fake ass people give up on you at least you know you got the man upstairs cuz many of times thats all ive had

ya ive tried to rely on him but its not worked for me so i gave up on it

if i offended anybody.............good cuz i dont give a fuck

what goes around comes around, im going throught all the hell i done put others throught, i aint seen sunshine in over a year, but im still here and theres gotta be a reason, just keep your faith and walk with your head held high

God damn, I feel like im on fuckin oprah

striaght, but i didnt like the concept tho

I didn't like this. Concept sucked, and you sucked. And for acting like a dick throughout your thread to people who are trying to give you constructive feedback this is what you'll get from me:
A Knife, a rope, and a gun are on the table. Pick one to kill yourself with

bitch she cant get u off member that shit u told me guess beyonce's just ya front skiddz

^ even though i dont usually agree with SkiddZ, you are one cocky piece shit. I didnt like the topic either, but judging on your performance as well, you werent all the hot shit you act like you are. You didnt really have consistent syllable rhymes, vocab was weak except a bit towards the end, and your flow needs work. it get 5.5/10 for performance, but it was a pretty crappy concept to come out with - i respect you for doing whatever your feeling, but many people arent going to feel you and it is pretty stupid to say fuck god... if you even believe in god, then you should know that he put you on Earth (remember i said IF you believe in god) and saying "fuck God" is pretty stupid