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CrackaBox187 12-17-03 10:33 PM

If you don't know me
 
If you don't fuckin' know me, don't let my name out cha mouth, ima tie bound and gag then fuck the shit out your spouse, in your house, in your bed, while your daughter give me head, who you pretend to roll with bra, ima have to clean this out like an enema, put ten to ya temple bombs and end ya like December, start over again to the next hoe steppin in, fuck a wide vocabulary, it's simple, SUCK MY DICK like its m&m's, im back in this dope game, baggin up cocaine, I've done sold my frosted flakes, and god damn there grrrrrrreat, and when the price goes up don't think im jinxed, ima flip everything like a game of tidly winks, ya'lls a bunch of faggots in girldles, cuz i done took your girl and oozed her down like ninja turtles, ya'll still think it's a game with the 45 in my hand, look over and notice i've done put 8 in your man, stop and notice i've done evicted ya'll plan, oh CrackaBox please, im sick how you think your girl got herpes, ima sick hustler im sellin HIV, and for 1 time only, a gram a G Yall bitches just can't fuck with me

CrackaBox187 12-17-03 10:37 PM

If you don't fuckin' know me, don't let my name out cha mouth, ima tie bound and gag then fuck the shit out your spouse, in your house, in your bed, while your daughter give me head, who you pretend to roll with bra, ima have to clean this out like an enema, put ten to ya temple bombs and end ya like December, start over again to the next hoe steppin in, fuck a wide vocabulary, it's simple, SUCK MY DICK like its m&m's, im back in this dope game, baggin up cocaine, I've done sold my frosted flakes, and god damn there grrrrrrreat, and when the price goes up don't think im jinxed, ima flip everything like a game of tidly winks, ya'lls a bunch of faggots in girldles, cuz i done took your girl and oozed her down like ninja turtles, ya'll still think it's a game with the 45 in my hand, look over and notice i've done put 8 in your man, stop and notice i've done evicted ya'll plan, oh CrackaBox please, im sick how you think your girl got herpes, ima sick hustler im sellin HIV, and for 1 time only, a gram a G Yall bitches just can't fuck with me

MethodZ 12-17-03 10:43 PM

this is wack

DEZ 4 LIFE :)

agents will get u

WORD~PERFECT 12-17-03 10:47 PM

personally i didnt like the diss i mean you attacked but lacked so much of what makes it a banger this was some lines thrown with fillers.it's like trying to kill a freestyle rapper by taking his paper away.....it wont matter he can staill do it.this was futile to read and though you aint garbage this didnt upgrade you any.

CrackaBox187 12-17-03 10:58 PM

man i just threw that shit together but while i take your constructive critisism, Methodz take your lil young ass back to fuckin school and shut the fuck up

Speek.E.Z. 12-17-03 11:21 PM

hey your whack.. all of you.. even methodz ;) but ya you get your three "illest" emcees and I will grab dez and one more, then we can dance hows that sound.. boy?

Dez 12-17-03 11:44 PM

In case you were blind to my previous showings, I posted 'GANGSTA DEZ' as a joke before the verse. Ha. As for this 'diss', not only was your structure sub-satisfactory, but you lacked punches that home. Nice fake personals.


Expect to be dealt with soon.

MethodZ 12-17-03 11:51 PM

im down speek......by the way get on AIM hoe...u needa give me my money ....

Mr.Christensen 12-17-03 11:56 PM

You guys do know
cr0nix and LoCo are the same person

SAD

Nyte Fire 12-18-03 12:03 AM

Yeah...I read about half of it....the structure is horrible...no offense..try to have all your lines evenly matched...rather then havin one short line and then stretched out lines it makes it look like shit...other than that its fuckin funny as hell, great

Nyte Fire 12-18-03 12:07 AM

back to Crackas post about his rap....shut the fuck up...if you wanna post somin start a new topic..and dont post it again 4 minutes later either....lame

Speek.E.Z. 12-18-03 02:00 AM

you've been served..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99592

Dez 12-18-03 03:34 AM

^ And how.

str8-n-sane 12-18-03 07:06 AM

lmao....ill battle for you guys...lol....NOT CRONIC....... sorry dueche your wack....

LM 12-18-03 07:14 AM

This wasnt any good.
Structure, flow in some parts, punches, personals....everythin were under par and need improvin.
Oh and dez will murder you on his comeback.
Keep droppin but stay away from the disses.
3/10


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