aight uppin for votes again plz (3)............................................... ...
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Bottem Line......Brendan fed miserably.......

Mc-had he not have...he might have beaten u...
^^u really need to work on your structure

as far as i'm concerned he broke the rules so theres no need to break down

vote McProfit

Aight goos battle
MC u had good punches,aight disses, word play was good
bren Ya flow as good, and structure

Bren got this cuz MC ya structure and flow was all over, bars s was bad too

vote Brendan

hit this up wit an honets vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100172

and hit this battle up to wit an honets vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99656

peace.

aight uppin for votes ...............(4)................................ .................
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Umm.. should I even respond? This has gotta be a joke
I can't even understand half that wack shit your wrote.

Ouch.

"Faget land?" Come on, you can't even spell your punchlines
the illiterate shouldn't waste thier time writing rhymes

Nah.

My verse hit ya so hard you be like, "Yo what happened?"
Hurry up, take that dick out ya mouth and start rapping!

Ouch

I'ma call this chump "skittles," he blows like el nino
on his knees in a Gay parade so he can "taste the rainbow"

lol

Making fun of my name? Son, what's the deal?
You're named 'Mc'Profit like you're a fucking happy meal

Nice punch!

10 lines yet? don't even matter, this battles mine
You suck Profit, thats the truth, *bottom line*

eh.


i dunno. i think mc took it ;)

thanx bro try to poll vote it when you get 100 votes. Peace...........
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Originality - Brendan.. nice
Flow - Brendan.. nice rhythm made for betta punches
Punches - Brendan.. Mc was all general an played
Personals - Brendan.. tho u shouldnt feed
Structure - Brendan.. Mc's bars were stretched

VoTe = Brendan

^^was much more personal.. Mc's coulda been for anyone but Brendan's was tailor made.

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Punches=Mc
Flow=Tie
Structure=Bren
Creativity= Tie
Enjoyment = Mc
Opener = Mc
Closer = Mc

MC YOUR VOTED ON MY ATTLE BUT FORGOT TO POLL IT PLEASE GO POLL IT

THANX

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100300

brendan won this no question

haha he embarassed u __________________________________________________ _________

YO MC PROFIT I REALLY NEED THAT VOTE DAWG ... YOU STATED YOUR VOTE IN MY THREAD BUT YOU DDITN POLL IT .. PLEASE GO POLL IT

THANX MAN

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100300

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I give this to brendan for his great structure and witty punches. Definitely played punches but witty. McProfit came a lil raunchy and really wasn't too smooth with the wordplay. the rhyme didn't quite flow well with me. Maybe I didn't read it right who knows? but it was a lil off to me.