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hey nice piece yall i nominate this for legends. nice topic and beautifully put together, it deserves it. . . . . . . . .
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really good concept, and done very, very nicely.
some really good wordplay, and vocabulary. g-hod, some ill as fuck vocab, and the pictures you painted with words was great. TR, nice shit, didnt stray, nice vocab, some cool immagery. peace |
legends? yay
thanks alot guys, up up and away |
Re: Potential Eyes - TR and G. Hod
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See, its not that hard. Fucking rebelion starter G.Hod. |
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definitly Legends potential
flow was remarkably sweet both dope writers and managed to surprise me nice imagery and concept as well two different styles that worked well together nice |
well it got in legends
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what can i say that hasn't already been said? basically, i loved it, everything about it was dope and you are both great lyricists, judging by this alone (i will look out for more of your work!) vocab was the thing that stood out the most to me, besides the underlying message.
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agree with him about favorite line^
anyway.. ghod ur flow was nice.. and a good bar structure it got better as i read..and i wasnt dissapointed by it i've seen u do better though realist.. flow was decent nice bar structure too Could I practice law, when I play with violence Decided my fate with quick silence, past tense Darkness surrounds me, night school commence good shit^ your verse just lacked the depth of ghods good collab though |
fgee
one day i will finally impress you cause everything i do i get an 'ehh' at best.. damnit im trying |
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