reverb aint bad just make it less.your voice is bad try tweaking it with certain things.you have no bass in your voice.lyrics are ok here.nothing great.overal decent but m.a.s would kill you on this.keep practicing......thats the only way to get good.

lmao at the spul shit though.................hahahahahhahahahhahahhahaha hahhaha

lmaooo this shit is beautiful. ahahahah I forgot you were all high on yourself back then too. And got shitted on. We ain't even have to say shit. ahahahahahahahahahah

"The breaks over... the official take over has begun!" lmaoooo

2 years later.......... :)

I mean it's alright, about 1:18-1:25 you get off your flow a little bit.

The part dissing on SPuL was kinda lame, whatever though.

Not really feeling the diss track, you might be better suited for another style, you just don't sound intimidating, not trying to disrespect you, I'm just not feeling it.

But word if you fix your mixing issues, you got some lyrical skills.

This wasn't that bad man.

You need to work on your flow, but everybody has to start somewhere.

Just work on smoothing your flow out more, and getting the delivery down.

Just keep at it bro.

thx for all the feed guys .... i am tryin' to work on some issues .. i was usin' a 1 dollar mic when I recorded this...

1 dollar? At least it's worth more than what anybody would pay to see you perform b!


ZING! :hump:

your a genius son...