RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Write Away Your Thoughts (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=198)
-   -   Chat (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=246423)

Brandon Cee 05-16-07 05:20 PM

word...I am going to try and get Monk to join. He's good

Brandon Cee 05-16-07 05:20 PM

word...I am going to try and get Monk to join. He's good

Brandon Cee 05-16-07 05:20 PM

word...I am going to try and get Monk to join. He's good

Brandon Cee 05-16-07 05:20 PM

word...I am going to try and get Monk to join. He's good

Terumoto 05-16-07 06:15 PM

V/ Mr Write

I can explain it if you want.

Terumoto 05-16-07 06:15 PM

V/ Mr Write

I can explain it if you want.

Terumoto 05-16-07 06:15 PM

V/ Mr Write

I can explain it if you want.

Terumoto 05-16-07 06:15 PM

V/ Mr Write

I can explain it if you want.

Brandon Cee 05-16-07 06:59 PM

Please do. lol.....

Brandon Cee 05-16-07 06:59 PM

Please do. lol.....

Brandon Cee 05-16-07 06:59 PM

Please do. lol.....

Brandon Cee 05-16-07 06:59 PM

Please do. lol.....

Terumoto 05-17-07 02:41 AM

Mr Write's verse just had more depth, it was generally better. Better concept, I preferred his flow also. I felt absolutely no sympathy towards Lampejo's character, who came across as shallow. There was basically no development, not even a chance for me to feel sympathy due to poor execution. The simple flow didn't really help convey the story either.

Terumoto 05-17-07 02:41 AM

Mr Write's verse just had more depth, it was generally better. Better concept, I preferred his flow also. I felt absolutely no sympathy towards Lampejo's character, who came across as shallow. There was basically no development, not even a chance for me to feel sympathy due to poor execution. The simple flow didn't really help convey the story either.

Terumoto 05-17-07 02:41 AM

Mr Write's verse just had more depth, it was generally better. Better concept, I preferred his flow also. I felt absolutely no sympathy towards Lampejo's character, who came across as shallow. There was basically no development, not even a chance for me to feel sympathy due to poor execution. The simple flow didn't really help convey the story either.

Terumoto 05-17-07 02:41 AM

Mr Write's verse just had more depth, it was generally better. Better concept, I preferred his flow also. I felt absolutely no sympathy towards Lampejo's character, who came across as shallow. There was basically no development, not even a chance for me to feel sympathy due to poor execution. The simple flow didn't really help convey the story either.

fuck yuu 05-17-07 11:39 AM

Uppin...

0-1

fuck yuu 05-17-07 11:39 AM

Uppin...

0-1

fuck yuu 05-17-07 11:39 AM

Uppin...

0-1

fuck yuu 05-17-07 11:39 AM

Uppin...

0-1

Brandon Cee 05-17-07 03:09 PM

after one more vote, this is closed, unless it's for Lamp

Brandon Cee 05-17-07 03:09 PM

after one more vote, this is closed, unless it's for Lamp

Brandon Cee 05-17-07 03:09 PM

after one more vote, this is closed, unless it's for Lamp

Brandon Cee 05-17-07 03:09 PM

after one more vote, this is closed, unless it's for Lamp

fuck yuu 05-18-07 07:41 AM

Brandon stop posting in here and fuckin vote already so we can try and set up new battles..

Edit: If this is not voted on by today then it will be a 3way title match with myself vs write vs mariah.

fuck yuu 05-18-07 07:41 AM

Brandon stop posting in here and fuckin vote already so we can try and set up new battles..

Edit: If this is not voted on by today then it will be a 3way title match with myself vs write vs mariah.

fuck yuu 05-18-07 07:41 AM

Brandon stop posting in here and fuckin vote already so we can try and set up new battles..

Edit: If this is not voted on by today then it will be a 3way title match with myself vs write vs mariah.

fuck yuu 05-18-07 07:41 AM

Brandon stop posting in here and fuckin vote already so we can try and set up new battles..

Edit: If this is not voted on by today then it will be a 3way title match with myself vs write vs mariah.

Brandon Cee 05-20-07 11:27 PM

Ok then here's my vote...battles go up tomorrow guys...

Lampejo- Your shit was really mellow and straight forward, I really enjoyed it in it's entirety, the storyline just went nicely, BUT I felt it was too short and that the story ened abruptly.

Write- The poetic essence in this piece was layed out nicely, BUT I didn't like the storyline as much. as Lamp's. The emotion is always your strongpoint, as seen here, but I couldn't feel the styory, it seems like it's way overused bud.

v/Lamp for the more original story, in my opinion.

Brandon Cee 05-20-07 11:27 PM

Ok then here's my vote...battles go up tomorrow guys...

Lampejo- Your shit was really mellow and straight forward, I really enjoyed it in it's entirety, the storyline just went nicely, BUT I felt it was too short and that the story ened abruptly.

Write- The poetic essence in this piece was layed out nicely, BUT I didn't like the storyline as much. as Lamp's. The emotion is always your strongpoint, as seen here, but I couldn't feel the styory, it seems like it's way overused bud.

v/Lamp for the more original story, in my opinion.

Brandon Cee 05-20-07 11:27 PM

Ok then here's my vote...battles go up tomorrow guys...

Lampejo- Your shit was really mellow and straight forward, I really enjoyed it in it's entirety, the storyline just went nicely, BUT I felt it was too short and that the story ened abruptly.

Write- The poetic essence in this piece was layed out nicely, BUT I didn't like the storyline as much. as Lamp's. The emotion is always your strongpoint, as seen here, but I couldn't feel the styory, it seems like it's way overused bud.

v/Lamp for the more original story, in my opinion.

Brandon Cee 05-20-07 11:27 PM

Ok then here's my vote...battles go up tomorrow guys...

Lampejo- Your shit was really mellow and straight forward, I really enjoyed it in it's entirety, the storyline just went nicely, BUT I felt it was too short and that the story ened abruptly.

Write- The poetic essence in this piece was layed out nicely, BUT I didn't like the storyline as much. as Lamp's. The emotion is always your strongpoint, as seen here, but I couldn't feel the styory, it seems like it's way overused bud.

v/Lamp for the more original story, in my opinion.

fuck yuu 05-22-07 12:46 PM

word thanks man..

3-way title match this week then...

and yeah i know my piece sucked i had to rush to get it done.

fuck yuu 05-22-07 12:46 PM

word thanks man..

3-way title match this week then...

and yeah i know my piece sucked i had to rush to get it done.

fuck yuu 05-22-07 12:46 PM

word thanks man..

3-way title match this week then...

and yeah i know my piece sucked i had to rush to get it done.

fuck yuu 05-22-07 12:46 PM

word thanks man..

3-way title match this week then...

and yeah i know my piece sucked i had to rush to get it done.

Journal!st 05-23-07 01:23 AM

iight im cool with that now brandon and exact anfd lamp get to making new matches...im flying out this weekend and a tourny this week so .....

Journal!st 05-23-07 01:23 AM

iight im cool with that now brandon and exact anfd lamp get to making new matches...im flying out this weekend and a tourny this week so .....

Journal!st 05-23-07 01:23 AM

iight im cool with that now brandon and exact anfd lamp get to making new matches...im flying out this weekend and a tourny this week so .....

Journal!st 05-23-07 01:23 AM

iight im cool with that now brandon and exact anfd lamp get to making new matches...im flying out this weekend and a tourny this week so .....


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 09:19 PM.