word...I am going to try and get Monk to join. He's good
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word...I am going to try and get Monk to join. He's good
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word...I am going to try and get Monk to join. He's good
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word...I am going to try and get Monk to join. He's good
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V/ Mr Write
I can explain it if you want. |
V/ Mr Write
I can explain it if you want. |
V/ Mr Write
I can explain it if you want. |
V/ Mr Write
I can explain it if you want. |
Please do. lol.....
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Please do. lol.....
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Please do. lol.....
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Please do. lol.....
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Mr Write's verse just had more depth, it was generally better. Better concept, I preferred his flow also. I felt absolutely no sympathy towards Lampejo's character, who came across as shallow. There was basically no development, not even a chance for me to feel sympathy due to poor execution. The simple flow didn't really help convey the story either.
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Mr Write's verse just had more depth, it was generally better. Better concept, I preferred his flow also. I felt absolutely no sympathy towards Lampejo's character, who came across as shallow. There was basically no development, not even a chance for me to feel sympathy due to poor execution. The simple flow didn't really help convey the story either.
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Mr Write's verse just had more depth, it was generally better. Better concept, I preferred his flow also. I felt absolutely no sympathy towards Lampejo's character, who came across as shallow. There was basically no development, not even a chance for me to feel sympathy due to poor execution. The simple flow didn't really help convey the story either.
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Mr Write's verse just had more depth, it was generally better. Better concept, I preferred his flow also. I felt absolutely no sympathy towards Lampejo's character, who came across as shallow. There was basically no development, not even a chance for me to feel sympathy due to poor execution. The simple flow didn't really help convey the story either.
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after one more vote, this is closed, unless it's for Lamp
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after one more vote, this is closed, unless it's for Lamp
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after one more vote, this is closed, unless it's for Lamp
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after one more vote, this is closed, unless it's for Lamp
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Brandon stop posting in here and fuckin vote already so we can try and set up new battles..
Edit: If this is not voted on by today then it will be a 3way title match with myself vs write vs mariah. |
Brandon stop posting in here and fuckin vote already so we can try and set up new battles..
Edit: If this is not voted on by today then it will be a 3way title match with myself vs write vs mariah. |
Brandon stop posting in here and fuckin vote already so we can try and set up new battles..
Edit: If this is not voted on by today then it will be a 3way title match with myself vs write vs mariah. |
Brandon stop posting in here and fuckin vote already so we can try and set up new battles..
Edit: If this is not voted on by today then it will be a 3way title match with myself vs write vs mariah. |
Ok then here's my vote...battles go up tomorrow guys...
Lampejo- Your shit was really mellow and straight forward, I really enjoyed it in it's entirety, the storyline just went nicely, BUT I felt it was too short and that the story ened abruptly. Write- The poetic essence in this piece was layed out nicely, BUT I didn't like the storyline as much. as Lamp's. The emotion is always your strongpoint, as seen here, but I couldn't feel the styory, it seems like it's way overused bud. v/Lamp for the more original story, in my opinion. |
Ok then here's my vote...battles go up tomorrow guys...
Lampejo- Your shit was really mellow and straight forward, I really enjoyed it in it's entirety, the storyline just went nicely, BUT I felt it was too short and that the story ened abruptly. Write- The poetic essence in this piece was layed out nicely, BUT I didn't like the storyline as much. as Lamp's. The emotion is always your strongpoint, as seen here, but I couldn't feel the styory, it seems like it's way overused bud. v/Lamp for the more original story, in my opinion. |
Ok then here's my vote...battles go up tomorrow guys...
Lampejo- Your shit was really mellow and straight forward, I really enjoyed it in it's entirety, the storyline just went nicely, BUT I felt it was too short and that the story ened abruptly. Write- The poetic essence in this piece was layed out nicely, BUT I didn't like the storyline as much. as Lamp's. The emotion is always your strongpoint, as seen here, but I couldn't feel the styory, it seems like it's way overused bud. v/Lamp for the more original story, in my opinion. |
Ok then here's my vote...battles go up tomorrow guys...
Lampejo- Your shit was really mellow and straight forward, I really enjoyed it in it's entirety, the storyline just went nicely, BUT I felt it was too short and that the story ened abruptly. Write- The poetic essence in this piece was layed out nicely, BUT I didn't like the storyline as much. as Lamp's. The emotion is always your strongpoint, as seen here, but I couldn't feel the styory, it seems like it's way overused bud. v/Lamp for the more original story, in my opinion. |
word thanks man..
3-way title match this week then... and yeah i know my piece sucked i had to rush to get it done. |
word thanks man..
3-way title match this week then... and yeah i know my piece sucked i had to rush to get it done. |
word thanks man..
3-way title match this week then... and yeah i know my piece sucked i had to rush to get it done. |
word thanks man..
3-way title match this week then... and yeah i know my piece sucked i had to rush to get it done. |
iight im cool with that now brandon and exact anfd lamp get to making new matches...im flying out this weekend and a tourny this week so .....
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iight im cool with that now brandon and exact anfd lamp get to making new matches...im flying out this weekend and a tourny this week so .....
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iight im cool with that now brandon and exact anfd lamp get to making new matches...im flying out this weekend and a tourny this week so .....
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iight im cool with that now brandon and exact anfd lamp get to making new matches...im flying out this weekend and a tourny this week so .....
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