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Zach da Ripper 01-02-04 11:19 AM

This nigga aint no "straight" ace, he's the gay ace,
Watch my lyrical missle's explode in his face,
Matter of fact this nigga's more like the Queer of Spades,
how's his boyfriend gon' be in the third grade;
This nigga actin hard, cuz he's from the windy city,
all the B.S. he spits, his breath must smell shitty;
Nigga, u got 4 wins?, that must not be right,
unless u battled the 4 wackest people on the website;

Straight Ace 01-02-04 11:36 AM

Gee..Golly..Gosh..what is that supposed to be..
..There's a min. of 6 lines..
& dont try to blame it on the title above ur avy..
Kid is useless, holds no value he doesnt count..
Replyin in a battle..
Just a pathetic excuse to up.. his post amount..
Zach lacks originallity this kid simply put is old..
& the only thing i notice..
Is the extra info next to ur post, written in bold..
Log out..just leave & dont come back..dont reply.
Ya u stand out..
Cause this kid is wacker then the average guy...
Edit:-------
Quick to edit...fool originally just posted two..
A herb paradise..
Cause there's no time when this shit is due....

Run along now little one..

- k ! L L z - 01-02-04 11:54 AM

STraight Ace is Srtaight Gay..
Mayday this Kids Trippin Like No Money On Pay-day..
Got you Ina "Buch" Like "Brady"..
Batteling Me. "Life Hurts" Like-a Lady Creating a Baby..
Just Maybe I'll Bite you Wit Rabies..
mack on your Ladies Then Steal'em. Banana clips I Peel'em..

Brendan 01-02-04 12:15 PM

You try to advance on me - I'll kill ya
So will ya, just back down before I smack ya in ya grill, uh
I'll hit you so hard when I take aim
I'll have you fliped around like that 'i' in ya screen name
You thinking, "damn son, this guys pretty sick"
But you gotta take a number to hop on my dick.

Straight Ace 01-02-04 12:15 PM

Soley directed at K!llz

..F u c k Y o u .. all i got to say, u dont matter..
Stick a straw in ur ear..
& suck n soak your brain out, after it splatters..
Killz-get killed how ironic how he's displayin his faith..
..Rockin' a girl in his avy when he still has yet to date..
Leave u 'out of date' history to mankind u've passed..
Funny how u atleast for a second or two seemed to last..
Leave this kid lost in both reality & illusion..searchin'..
& after i press submit ill leave this kid in the past tense..
of emerging..

Ghetto_poet 01-02-04 12:33 PM

ur on the right train nigga, juss on the wrong path/
u call urself straight ace wit 2 crooked dicks up ur ass/
ya records 4-0 and ya egos in tha way/
them battles waz give aways likely on gay pride day/
youz a fly weight blowing in the windy city/
thoze dots at the end of ya line dont make ya rhymes witty

Dialect OTYP 01-02-04 01:49 PM

in real life id prolly cock back and leave ya neck a wreck
im bout ta take this 'poet' of da site and he aint got a record yet
dont forget who be stompin niggas like a jump or a club fight
im takin ya breath ta death because i love life

CareFree 01-02-04 01:53 PM

For the way you were rhymin, you should watch wut you say/
You pay too much attention to straight ace/You must be gay/
Talkin bout dicks up the ass, your just pissed/
He wont give you nothin hard but you want that dick/
Dont try to explain it by replying right back/
Cuz my mind dont work like yours, get it right jack/

Ghetto_poet 01-02-04 02:12 PM

first of all bitch i cant even find ya rhyme scheme/
takin up 4 straight ace tryin to make a place in his wet dream?/
im not even going to ask...../
when i see ya ima blast,blow my semen on ya mask/
lyrics i spit fast so fast the make ya gag/
unload 2 with the mag and blow ya brains out ya ass

Straight Ace 01-02-04 03:10 PM

Aimed at Ghetto_poet
Silly kid ill double ya losses & drop twelve..
Wants to be a stand-up comedian..
..Just to prove he can stand up for himself..
Thinkin' he has a chance of victory vs me..
..Elevate by selectin' ur text & hit the delete key..
I could care less 'bout you to me ur..well shit..
..Only way he'll stand out..
Is typin' his scripts while holdin in 'SHIFT'..
Just a regular newbie..they come & go..so do u..
..Heres another fact.. 1 plus 1 is...:thefinger..2..
For him..a street immediately represents ghetto..
Ill make u lose twice.. by makin' my words echo..
You're a joke kid..

- k ! L L z - 01-02-04 03:23 PM

Chicagoe's a Loosin State. Bulls And Sox..
Ace you really Aint Straught. Full of Cocks..
Stick and Move - Im Hot Like Potatoes..
One On One Equals, rambo's Death SequeL's..
My Heat-Will..Kill Ignorant People..

730 01-02-04 03:27 PM

^^Aimed for straight Ace....^^kid you dissed him terribly
 
^^you wack fuck, kid just stop 'fore i put five on it
N throw away an S.A like i got a bad mark on it
you got it that's true, but these newbs are better than u
while u still stay locked under 7.....like ya fuckin crew
you suckin too, N i don't need a paragraph dick head
all i need to do Is call the pussy outta his weak legs
N please beg, as i strap bombs over u who sway
:gfy:<--N count down on Straight Ace like new years day

- k ! L L z - 01-02-04 03:44 PM

:thefinger
^^
It's That TIME to beat Kid's Around SEVEN-THIRTY. .
Say Hi To JESUS Kid. You Goin-Ta Heaven EARLY. . .
Wack at Rap So Just Stop, SkiLL Is what You Dont Got.
Kill Crack Heads Over Electronics. guess My PHONES HOT.
While your Flow's Not. SHUT UP just DON'T TALK. . .
^^
:shoot:

Straight Ace 01-02-04 03:59 PM

Soley created with the purpose to attack 730
When pressed submit, might not have known..
Ur not fully developed yet Like Chingy's vocal tone..
Kid is a statistic, bound to get sonned..& clowned..
To me ur first of all a zero like i read the other way round..
Damn myself i think as i reply & know u'll wont grasp..
....See ur post? it'll be deleted..it's a admin task....
^ Cause freeposts & wack shit will destroyed..Its true..
Go ahead & clown mine..but u & ur alias..dont make a crew..
..Kid your skill is nothin, empty kinda like your sig...
& while ur impact is nowhere..mine is this
BIG!..

..Now seriously before u even consider replyin'..
..at least put some effort into ur work..u take all the fun out of this..

derekpacisalive 01-02-04 04:48 PM

..
 
Straight Ace is a fag who dresses in drag
brags bout how he lost a pound on jenny craig
searching the net for help on how to rap right.
typing to his homeys on a WEBSIYEET!
I mise well clone me so there can be two D's
and you can be me and finally compete!

730 01-02-04 05:06 PM

Directed to Straight Ace::

you're a fake, blah this shit's easy as cake
w/ cold text, cuz even nomads crossed some ice when Barin Straight
you caught on late, So i'll swing him till he's blue in the face
N throw him straight, Until i create me a fuckin flyin Ace
you get laced with hits, dabbed in the face and it's...
like i'll straight crack this kid....just like his bottom lip
please quit, ya verse had only 1 punch in it
So i'll bang on this A-minor, like he had notes in it
please bring it, cuz u the king when punches arise....
between any fags asshole or ya lover boys thighs...


dude you barely dissed me.....don't lecture me about commin correct...this's a cypher i ain't even bringin my best while you're tryin N i'm still kickin yo ass....lmao

Straight Ace 01-02-04 05:40 PM

Basically you dont comprehend the basics of rap..
Makin' excuses..wont cover up the fact ur still crap..
Your lines repetetive, seen one..the rest is the same..
Like Olsen twins..the first is special after that its plain..
I'll simplify my style..for a while just to make him see..
He cud switch postcounts wit Cam & still be new to RB..
Hence my wordplay in various,previous posts..
..What, i dont punch? ....then u tickle at most..

730 01-02-04 05:54 PM

Straight Ace

dude ya trippin N fa real ya ass must be playin
cuz we read all ya verses...N still don't know w/ the fuck u sayin
dude ya gay and...his skinny ass get's blown of the branch
then off the tree, through the country side N off the friggin map
duke ya none existent to me, N i'll prove it in bunches
cuz if i had nothin to look for, i'd just look at his punches
you'll get crunched kid, fucked N you'll feel the pain
Till he go nuts like i just put my fuckin dick thru his brain....

^^somethin wack for you....cuz ya verse was utterly shit....

Straight Ace 01-02-04 06:15 PM

..Time to shut a newbie up & destroy his act..
Shud put up a drop down menu in his sig..
...............Just to state all the things he lacks..
Utterly shit, or ingenius mind unable to peer..
Now prove ur worth by acceptin this right Here..
Ill annihilate this new kids fake facade..
Who's name Originates from a cheap arcade..
^highscore..

tubesteak 01-02-04 06:19 PM

oh shit i crap on my shoe
now what you ganna do
what you ganna do
when the tubesteak comes for you
better grab all that lube and start applying
cause once my fly starts popin and my bone starts popin
and no telling what i be copin
anal or oral its all the same cause my dick alread came
piss or shit it makes no difference i like corn better then lemonade

Verbatim 01-02-04 07:35 PM

This dude is two-four, thinks he's all hardcore
you suck! i don't wanna hear u anymore
web shiznit is that your fuckin occupation?
take the dick outta your ass, to cure your constipation
your interests is words? but you don' even know any
how much are in your vocab.....twenty?
go buy a dictionary, unless you can't afford it
if not, then go find a gay boat and board it

The Jett 01-02-04 08:56 PM

That's right ur white? ur a disgrace to my race
Fuk this canadian beef...Ur jus a mad-cow waste
double-standard in place..this kid still lacks a punch
he's 3-2?...but 0-5.... if he doesn't eat dick for lunch
claimin thugs4'life but killa ur a just a pale canuck
Krem just fill's up pillow's way he threads an clucks

Philosopher King 01-03-04 01:50 AM

Ya better turn around or you'll find yourself tossin'
Call yourself Carson, someone cut off your Slauson.
Then you call yourself "whome", when I think you meant "whom",
When in Rome go back home, or I'll make this your tomb.
Got no room for your pretense, I'm gold and you're frankincense,
Frankly, you got no defense for bringin' that nonsense.
So fuckin' dense that you've got your own gravity,
Lose your teeth, you don't care -- your whole head is a cavity.
Fuck filling pillows, your brain needs some stuffing,
I'm rebuffing your bluffing, you punk -- you're worth nothing.

- k ! L L z - 01-03-04 02:37 AM

I was Bored So I'ma Diss You Kinda Like ya Bitch Do . . .
Kid Move. You Get Miss-Used Gettiin Ripped Like Wet-TiSSue.
sick of shit rappers..He's a Wanna-B Mathers but I'd Rather...
Be me the Easy O-g Homie .. Straight C-walkin to some Old-ies.
fake Like Lip-stick Plus Your Bitches are Twisted..
Stcuk On My Nuts Explainin How My Dick-Is. Then Start To Lick-It.
You Justa Small Kid.. So You know What A TRICK-IS...





:shoot:

Dev 01-03-04 04:03 PM

typical of a noob, joining up words to show his skillz
when KILLZ, has got skillz like ma gramdma after her pilz
and ya hit weaker than a 2 brew teabag used twice
only half the spice and see thru no good to fight
bout as right as a blind man, not wanting sight
so try harder, come back with sumthin worthy to write!

Sergeant Crazy 01-03-04 06:06 PM

Brendan is gay, and Brendan is bent,
Shit, I heard his arse was up for rent,
Course it don't cost more than fifty pence,
Because you know that that fool ain't worth the expense,
He's had more penises up his ass,
Than Bob Marley smoked the grass,
He's a faggy lager shandy drinkin' son of a bitch,
And even Dale Winton goes "Hey, what a queer little shit"

*Dale WInton=gay guy off of English TV

Zach da Ripper 01-03-04 06:11 PM

Deva,.... I can't believe dis bitch came back,
this ho should know I got my flows down pact;
You back for more?? How many times I got to kill you??
you know I'll fuck u up worse than them purple pills do;
C'mon, why you try to joke the guy cuz he's new,
when u really just jealous, he got better rhymes than you;
U ain't hot, ho your flow is wack,
u just "Dike Deva" who was killed by "King Zach"

Dev 01-03-04 06:25 PM

whats this kid talking bout i never went away
i aint affraid of no little pussy fag ass gay!
ya name says it all cos thats the way ya heading
getting ripped by a murderer or anyone older than 7!
ya talk like you know me, wouldnt piss on ya grave!
i hang with the gentry, you hang with the slaves!

Mel-Man 01-03-04 08:23 PM

Yo fucka a slave or a gentry
I'm bout to spit atcha dome and make you leave the entry
You aint a fuckin emcee
Are you wit me
Aight b
Get out this cyper
And go write some shit that'll make you a lil hyper
You a big ass baby, wita pacifier
And I'wn babysit, so somebody come and change this kids fuckin diaper.
No time fah, cats who think they can rap
I do got time to make sho them same niggiz get mapped
as in layed out
are you afraid, pout.
And to piss on ya grave I aint gotta know you
I take a good leak, and my liquid/fluid show you.
Nice work, next time, make it easy and tell ya moms to lift her skirt
And yo put on another shirt, Make ya titties bigger
I know you like damn it, you fuckin nigger. Get in my Rova bitch
This here is done, the shits fuckin ova kid. WHO WONT IT? DOWN THERE?

Virtuoso 01-04-04 12:21 AM

....check.....

u quiver when i send lyrical~shappened-spheres,
game enlighted-for-years, i gave mel-man a loss... an he responded was wit-tears...
winning is nice~~ well thats atleast..... wat-you-heard..
i checked.. an yes!..this detroit'er...is really from a suburb...

haha...~Sonned

Castro XL 01-04-04 02:02 AM

Yo answers is wrong so im giving you a X
Hating on mel-man he might not send yo disabled check
If you wanted to get in office you wouldnt get elected
Cuz yo flow is disgusting like Whoopi Goldberg naked
Imma a badboy like I was loon or Diddy
And yo rhymes floating on water cuz them things is shitty

730 01-04-04 03:00 AM

when i craft blows straight i'll leave This C's back swole
while he in a orgy along with 8 other assholes
i'll slap whole faces like yours, N son i'll boss
while u keep tryna dance with ya father like luther vandross
a fat loss is what u gettin, but i'll allow u to floss
after i punch gaps in ya teeth, the length of ya toothbrush
so dude hush, you ain't a fighter N ya spit's gettin lighter
as i swing it cross, N toss it up in a friggin cypher...

Zach da Ripper 01-04-04 03:34 AM

Yo, you should put the mic down , cuz your flow is straight wack,
If u could go back in time, dawg, u never should've rapped;
730?? what the fuck that supposed to mean??
Oh yeah, that's what time I gotta pick yo mom up from Dairy Queen;
Don't hate cuz my lines are hot an yours are mediocre,
I bet u hang out wit your boyz, an ya'll play strip poker;
I don't take this serious, I kill u just for fun,
this guy's such a bitch, he can't rep where he's from;
If you come at me dude, u better be in the right mood,
cuz I'll pop and twist your guts like bad food;
So let me end this shit, this battle is ova'
may u rest in peace, I just killed the fake Hova

KeMy$t 01-04-04 04:15 AM

Ur mom gave u ur nickname cuz u ripped her shit up
Tryin to act like u bad, bitch u need to listen up
Sit down, quit talkin for i have to take ur life away
U'll be running to pac wishin for a better day
Ur second line dawg, eminem already said it don't u see
U just a bitin ass bitch who wanna try to be an emcee
U not, u fake and if u come back at me im gonna smack u
So go back to ur mommas room, i think i heard her call u

Mindtrap 01-04-04 04:22 AM

Colorful kid... peep the sig... whore cant be straight...
Mom was being literal at breakfest when she said you're special K...
Kids gay... loves the cock... we all know it so admit...
That ya idol is like ya verse... the gole golumn... a pil of shit...
So blah... a boring spit ya still got kicked... by the new kid...
Fucking up khemysts more than crack, coke and meth did

Philosopher King 01-04-04 08:09 AM

A case of entrapment -- this bitch's askin' for it,
So watch as I take your words down, make a report, and score it
Straight F's for "fuckin' stupid", except you're never fuckin', just stupid,
A million monkeys on typewriters saw, but they're too smart to do what you did,
You say his idol is his verse, but your verses are just idle,
Don't write a denial, they're vile -- shut your pie-hole.

Zach da Ripper 01-04-04 11:43 AM

Yo, did anyone else notice that this guy is a homo,
c'mon dawg, we know u wanna do some gay porno;
This niggaz so fat his pants is bustin at the seems,
He must've ate too many fuckin Boston Baked Beans;
Dont noone rep fuckin Boston anyway,
except u an Benzino, an ya'll both fuckin gay,
Philosopher Queen, should've thought harder bout ur rhymes,
How u ain't said shit in 6 lines

Rural Thug 01-04-04 04:23 PM

This wannabee cant read the instructions
Its 6 lines pussy so try and make that shit function
This muthafucker gets a miniscule hard on at luncheon
With his apple pie he fucks with his midget erection
When your nude, alone in front of a mirror and on your knees
The only hope you got is the front page of the Daily Sleeze
I think his insight to into male infertility
Shows you've had experience and your source has good reliabilty
But dont worry, just dont mind me
Just try and explain it to eventual wifey!

Bio*Chemist 01-04-04 04:42 PM

Diallo..

Give me a D for my resturant service..
Because when I Serve newbies they do vomits..
My lyrics lash out on victims sending hits like atomics..
Setting the stage and wipin Diallo like I was a dominatrix..
and Dominate this herb with my scripts..
This kat got only 12 post..and he's trying to diss the person above
your impotent swings couldn't even penitrate threw a slut...

Zach da Ripper 01-04-04 06:49 PM

Bio Chemist must've mixed some wrong shit,
U can find him under a fat roll on Pun's dick;
Dawg how long it take u to think of that fuckin quote,
or some nigga said it while u was givin him deepthroat;
Put the mic down, dawg, your not worthy,
I got blind furry, to hit u in the eye an make ur shit blurry;
"Insane Dick suckin lyricist''?? bunch of fuckin clowns,
my flow could get u so high, you'll never come down;
Why u tryin to battle when u know u just suck,
I'll kill u wit no remorce, cuz "I Just Dont Give A Fuck"


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