give this nigga a hand fuck it give em a 10
i dont really give a damn cuz i know this chump cant win
in a battle with a pump thats big enough ta blow off his chin(uuuggghh!!)
so dont stress it then i see yah tryin ta get loose
j curl got the name from lettin niggas hit his head wit nut'n
but juice :spit:
talkin like he killin somebody wit a key stroke
battl'n on the web but in his life he hang wit all tha weak folks :help:
this aint a diss par!!im givin urself props :huh:
i dont know how u came this far with out gettin urself shot
im threw.., this is a laugh track :evilgrin:
a web site finally made so wanna be rappers can get laughed at!!! :laugh:


-ColdSTEEL :laugh2:

coldsteel wat a name sumthin unique,
out here killin muthafuckas while othas is beatin dey meat,
usin wordplay and vocab to get by on dis site,
make wanab Mc's bawl n cry makes em scratch erase den re rite,
altho in text he hasnt won yet,
but el puertos got 1 n dats jus his pet,
yo dawg jus look at his battlin stats,
he hasnt lost once with is betta den most yall cats,
shit i lost a few but o well,
dis man is raw son but shhh he doesnt wana tell,
his keepin it a secret for a minute,
can u keep it? yo pretty soon yall wii get it,


hahaha yo man u need to win 1 it wud b easier but its all good, 1 Love

Yo this dudes emergin rippin you up like a fuckin sergen/
This dudes sick makin me go green like a gerken/
This guys takin heads hes workin.....its his job/
Takin more money than arcade slots/
He's a straight P.I.M.P....spit acid to boil you/
Sure to deflower every virgin jus to spoil you/
Spittin a river bigger than tha nile/
Rip you like you were a peice of paper thts his style/

shackles is so ill that he came up wit tha word...
sorry, i couldnt think of nothin to say... im to used to dissin folks... chek me out on "diss tha person above you" or... its called somethin like that. i got like 12 disses on there... i was hittin that shyt up... sorry for tha lack of compliments

hold up robs nockin on the do'
he's been on the site a week and hes 1 and 0
chi town is koo cause robs back in
try to battle him u wont win
his lyrics provide origianl sin
im stressin his skills and he aint even ma friend

yo guranteed u rhyme tight and fly
make sure you think on what to say before u startle and die
i can see you few years from now selling magazine
while im selling record deals everyday that its already mah routine
yo hold up bitch low riders inc
man ure down and u can write without an ink

i can't say how good u r cause u didn't do what the cypher said/
u couldn't compliment u had to diss instead/
u don't want me to do this and neither do i/
i don't want to leave and make sum1 cry/
but do me a favor and read before u write/
if you don't u'll never make it on this site/
i'm being nice and leavin it there/
but next time u don't read i'm not gonna care/
this is a girl, so yea ur right/
i do drop bombs and know how to fight/
so i'm out and remeber what i said/
read before u write or else ur dead/

**GOTTA LOVE ME**

Hypocrite, but still, shes the sickest chick
Ripped em dicks ^^ and shes flippin script,
spittin em mad rhymes4 ya.
Nah I aint hittin it, this gurl? I jus adore her.
From the- middle of hell, her post graceously ripped
dont believe me? check that flow showcased in her sig.
*claps...

This dudes like a flood when he clash,
He's spits drown em cats fast.
knockin em back to the past,
then lyrically flows on ure ass.
He the type that leaves ya bouncin, cos hes sounds ill..
Fuck that.. I too wanna be governed by the Council

dat kat knows his shit, he knows the flow
his nickname is right, ProForm yo
I wish i can spit his rhymes
but this shit is only 6 lines
I bet noone can say good shit bout me
go ahead next person, lets see :D

Wonderbread is yummy, it sits well in the tummy
its best with Jam, damn.. thats some good shit man..
put it in the toaster, I bet u will, I know ya,
and make that stuff brown, and taste it crackling down..

^^fucken *GAAAY .. lols..

ill, spits skill, while others spill shit wit dribble..
But while he's Fruity like that ^^* he's Drops kill like deadly skittles. wtf

you cant touch this.. fuck with proform.. you fucken wit poetry..
hes new here.. but dont be fooled, the kids hard in fuken notory..
like rotory engines, 'forms' unique perfected with no exceptions..
been rhymin since dr. suess readin baby stories n learnin lessons..
hell keep em guessin with questions.. elevation's his inspiration..
vocabulary geneous.. rhymin words createin his 'poetic illistration'..
like masterbation.. you going blind readin his lyrical masterpeices..
philosophising with great minds of intelligence to create a thesis..
so when u see this? remember poet's got his back runnin heartless..
whos the smartest.. hes kickin with the hardest artist reguardless..

respect it.

*respects..

Poet, the name says it all, hes flauntin relevance
Immaculately flowin with impeccably dauntin intelligence.
Tauntin malevolance, He's Ill-uminatic its true.
Evil, that kills and causes the adding of plastic wrappin on u
Drastically rappin, others break under the pressure-he bends shit.
Most front with their lines, but when rhymin this man is authentik.

~This dude will rip yah in half, merk yah fo sure, present future n past~
~Bitches left paralized in casts, slice u open wit a knife n blast wit a gat~
~This guys spits quicka tha semi auto-matik, head smashed n ribs battard~
~Leavin emphatic violence mid air mayhem like gunman piolets shattard~
~Unergoin perilous assaults wit knives..leave no ends untied~
~Battlin this guys unwise..Hazerdous situations will take lives~

This kid shackles, like an r.b just breakin' tackles, except he breakin' hoes/
Two loses with a win, and this cat just begin? ill bars dawg he makin' those/
I'm a vet and he soon to be, With more beef than toon and me, He's the shit/
The end of you other cats is loomin' see, Cuz Shackles is doomin' thee, U'll get ripped/
He's got skillz that can kill but he's a real ill mc rollin' with me, the v-i-to-the-p/
He spills the deal but fa' real he will make a mill smokin' with me, yeah.. pass the blunt g/

m. night shyamalan ain't gotta nada on
this 'village'
pimp smacking hoes so hard he causes brain spillage
he spits faster then Flo Jo runs
and he be killing players with his lyrical guns
kansas city hoes he'll rip you outta your clothes
faster than twister
he fucked your mom and banged your little sister
none can resist him-he's like he stole Austin Powers' mojo
he's so gangsta he's got me saying "I don't think we're in Kansas anymore Toto"
so leave the city and head out to the sticks
he'll be chasing you like Jason with a 12 inch dick
there's no escape from his rap wrath it's like the devil vs. G-O-D
i got mad love for the fucking village P-I-M-P.

^
Damn id give respect if i could
But all i can say was that neck was good
And thanks for hitting my mans
Plus you skills to swallow that with no hands
Damn how i was hitting them backshots
And you had the whole block lined up like feens at the crack spot
And i was feeling how you swalloed my sperm
While you was kneeling nut all in ya perm
And when my homies turn came around you was still drinking our nuts
The best thing i can say is to call you a slut :laugh:

Damn, I think Lyricalflowz23 is better than biggie
He didn't even write a rhyme, but he don't look shitty
It shows his skills when he says l m f a o
The only thing his opponents say is "ey yo, ey yo"
He'll pull up and not say anythign and get cash from a hoe
Infact they go up to him and say "Here ya go,
I been screwin all day to earn this much dough"

Yo Check,

Aight Listen Up....

This Guys So Hot Peeps Be "Gathering Round" Him Jus To Warm~Up...
Underestimating His "Deadly Skills" Is Wats Getting Your Ass Torn~Up...
Never Say A Bad Word To Him It Might Jus "Save"~Your~Life...
Him Losen A Battle Is Like Tellin "Scream" To Be Carefull Wit~A~Knife...
...It's Not Gonna Happen So Get Use To Being "K'Oed"...
You Betta Lay Down Your "Life" At Any Time If He "Says~So"...
Him And "Losin" Is Like Mixin "Peanut Butter" And "Hams" It Jus Doesn't~Go...

Roll u in a club gotsta holla at shackles
He the brer runnin shit he'll kill you lik " snap,pop,crackle"
In his criminal mind nobody violates the don
He'll write ur name on a piece of paper and ur family gon
Not just a hustler but a real rhyme sayer
Battle him god damn u aint got a prayer
so step bak, fall bak, dis aint lord of the rings
but shackles is here, its the return of the king

Peace.

Check my battles:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143324 Elusiv G vs. Invader_ZIM

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143098 Elusiv G vs. SLick SKillz

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143810 Elusiv G vs. lyrical metaphor

Peace.

^^^
i'm just 2 hot and u can't touch me
dey say u r what u eat so quess u pussy
can't see me...thinkin u push dro
u better off on da corner bein my ho
ho...get manly can grow some nuts
stop bein a faggot and take dat dick out ya butt
slut...if u really think dis ass is for you
get a condom and we'll see how ya punk ass do
you through(pause)I'll get like Biker Boi's and take ya lid
now be a good bitch and cum lick my kids

your name maybebe extremely stupid
but id suck ur tits even they had mucus
cause they're so big, and ideal body fig
to bad your fine ass has to wear a wig
you wanna be a man, i can see that damn
you should advertise on the cover of kam

Yo MC those were nice words,
got me comin back wantin thirds,
i read your shit and it made me cry,
i bet anybody you battle wants to die,
and as soon as they do they sigh,
cause thats what i would do if i battled you,
get down in the featle position fo an hour or two.

yo canx this thread quick, this shit startin to sound homo erotik and definitely on some fag shit. HAAHA...no wait I'm serious ya'll.. *Tor leaves quickly ensuring he is'nt seen exiting the thread*

hahhahhahahhahhahhaahahahhh!!!!
:laugh2:
I bet anybody that reads this bullshit cries...//
laughin...why?....they should start crackin bull whips....across his right side...of his face till he pass out an die!!//
lash outat this bitch with needle percision..show em what power will do//
an him gettin fucked in tha ass is the only way he was in
featle positon..." fo an hour or two"...//
Was that a compliment?...or a come on..//
that wasnt a flow..you just lookin for somebody's dick ta blow.... so you can get cummed on//FAGGOT RAPPER'S NOT ALLOWED :shoot:

Ok faggot rappers not allowed,
then i guess you should get out,
this is complement the person above you,
not diss the person the title should have told you,
but then again you an illeterate bitch,
well read this.....im not gay but you fooled me,
ColdSteel sounds like a dildo name to me,
so think about who you dissin before you post,
cause ill see you in hell so dont boast.............you want me to be gay huh wack as faggot step back into the darkness where you belong..........Peayce

*Niggaz get soooooooo..emotional!!!They remind me of my bitch!*-50cent(...it fits you!!)

compliment...well...okay....who cares//
common sense should tell you.." no way!"...u dont compare//
ta me..or tha rest of the folks on rap verse//
*peep* what he wrote...stole my lines... he just wrote em backwards//
he scared of raptor..u should give me a compliment//
Im much more prominate...plus my rhymes are way to dominate//
im 2 confident..I could show you what these emcees worth//
*cause thats what i would do if i battled you,*Ill make you cry for me like you did 4 Mc Merk..


-haahahhahahhahahhahhaaahhahahahahah!!! :laugh:
(you hurt yourself with that shit you wrote..)

yo thiz iz my boi, he raps with skill
unlike most he don't bored , he gives sum thrill
when he talks every1 better listen
he's lines are so good ur heart beat missin
u want to battle, u better think twice
no need to gamble, so don't roll the dice
he'll clean u up with sum water and a mop
fuck that, he's gat will jus go *pop*

badgurl

while i laided in my bed at night
She gave me the best head i ever had in my life
And as my team was piping from the back she was sucking me hard
Then i passed her off so she could start fucking my squad
She swallowed and dint leave a drop on the floor
She was the best ever outta all of them hot whores
She liked backshots and cum on her face
Said she like dick in her mouth she was feeling the taste :laugh:

Empire
this man is not happy, but hes kewl//
seems like he goes to school//
hes rich and handsome- damn hes got his own pool//
hes got the gurlz//
hes smart knowin all the plurals//
hes not take my word for it//
review wut i said and sit//

hey im bad at tis//im more of a disser than a nicer

bradley_thomas

mayn you look at this kid and what do you think?
hes new on the site... pussies warm and pink
hes fresh outta hte oven hasnt done much
3 text battles is all this kid has touched
you look at this nigga, and hes not very crued
but you ahve to admit hes kinda hot for a newb..

wtf??? this man was prolly masturbatin while he wrote that... his ass was thinkin about all the sex that he's NOT gettin

Oh Your Good But Shall I Say Not Wit Rap
Unless Theres A Condom Round So U Can Really WRAP
but hey U Did Ya Best I Cant Complain
Im A NEwb To but I Still Rock The Game
For Future Advice Dont Rap Bout Sexual Thingz
Especially To Another Dude But Hey Ya Did Y Thing

Look at this cat, there ain't no doubt he's rhymes is the illest
Better step back, when he comes around, he is the realist
His rhymes will pierce your soul sending you into a coma
Before you come to, he'll make sure death'll hold ya
Go ahead and battle him, but I'll tell ya I told ya
He will easily son you, then seriously scold ya

ok, u aint gota lotta street cred, but see, this boy is from michagin/
murder capitol of the nation, there aint no cats dissin him/
he got potential for a newb, even though hes only won 1 fight/
but its aight, this cats still workin on gittin his shit right/
so clap ya hands 2 this lightning bolt, he's hot and on fire/
he cant drop any lower, his skillz can only git higher

im uppin this thread.... i wanna hear sum POSOTVE remarks 4 once in my life....

im uppin this thread.... i wanna hear sum POSOTVE remarks 4 once in my life....

eyvon be tha don of tha femcees, for crists sake shes feminem
this girls got more poetecly inclined rhymes than the likes of the real eminem
shes slim shady with a weave, a real rhyme killin machine no doubt
gets up on tha stage, grabs tha mic and knocks niggaz tha fuck out
her poetry is only matched by her work on songs, she spits fire
fuck what ya heard this femcee will knock the air outta ya quicka than a flat tire

Pimpin Ain't Eazy and the one to know it is Big Papa
Master of Pimp Slap, and the one who shot ya
He's one of the illest cats up on Rap Verses
High Win Record, while snatching black purses
Born into this world and was destined to rhyme
With unbeatable skills that are messin with ya mind