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SPuLâ„¢ 04-17-04 04:56 PM

aiight, guess this got reopened. Aiight 4-4. Uppin'. BREAKDOWN THE VOTE OR IT WON'T COUNT!!!

SPuLâ„¢ 04-17-04 05:30 PM

It says it's 4-4, but Phat Mic's vote, which was explained well got DQed. I think I might have won. well, anywyas uppin'

Oc6 The Caustic 04-18-04 12:34 AM

Aight peeps, this was a very good battle.

Personals: You both had good Peronly's, but Spul try to get at her with something rather then the fact that she is a girl. Disaster had better Peronly's because she got you at every wich angle.
Punches: Both had good punches, I liked Spul's punches better because they hit hard as disaster's punches were good, but Spul's had better punchlines I though.
Structure: You both had good structures. I call this a tie, they were botch solid flows.
Multies: I didn't see much Multi's, but the both of you had the same about of Multi's, and I didn't see any decent ones from either of ya.
Verse: Disaster, the verse was too long. A verse that is too long means that some weak rhymes were in there that made the Verse stand out as not as hot. Shorten it, and make sure the verse is solid and hard hitting, this won't happen with a long verse like that. Not saying that I wasn't feelin' it, I think it would of been better off shorter which could of made a lot of your punches better. Spul, I liked your verse because you keep with a nice rhyme scheme.
WordPlay/Vocab: Lots of Wordplay here. I saw the same amount from both of ya, you both had a decent Vocab and tied them together to make some rhymes really sick. You both had a good perspective on this subject, both covered it well.
Originality: Spul defintly takes this one, there was too much fiction in your rhymes Disaster but you worked it out. Spul had a nice original touch.

This was a good battle and vote is very honest. I'll have to give it to Spul because his flow was so original and kept it in motion. Great battle!


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