^^^^not in crew WHEN SHE VOTED.....THAT COUNTS ......

STOP CRYING.....WE HAVE ENOUGH RIVERS........

Ouch, my pride.

Uppin for honest, explained votes ^

"I'm sorry for the freepost but yeah you dropped your verse before she even joined. and i dont think she joined....So stop crying like an infant."

^^^^^listen To The People.......

Thanx.....classic.... 4 Explaining To This Hard Headed Muthafukca.............

Will-a-peer Isn't In My Crew.......

aiight this was a decent battle i was expecting more from both of you i have seen fire rhymes in tha past so let me break it down.....

shadows edge

"At the mic this cat drop fruit bars like Fig Newton
And he recycle so many lines its like his verse’s a rerun"
^^ok opener could have been better amd it didnt rhyme although newton is spelled like that its pronounced new-tin.........5.5/10

This bar got more punches than 100 herbs like you
N you not original, just the first in line to cop a few
Shit after this battle you get disowned by the Class Sic crew
^^once again im expecting more from you..and my person opinion i hate the 3 line=1 bar thing fucks up a verse if u ask me.......5.5/10

You act like a thug rapper, but your rhymes betray
That you couldn’t hang if you was lynched by the KKK
^^HAHA nice bar......7/10

Occupation: hustling… hustle for your welfare check?
Fights out, so you hit the deck, guess its better than getting wrecked
Truth fucking hurts man, but I’ll break your neck
^^once again 3 lines=1 bar i aint feelin but u had some nice wordplay and multis.......6.5/10

Fuck $$, closest you got to cream is my creation seed stream
Got it all over your team.. so fuck your dream, you ain’t supreme
^^weak closer....ya verse started weak then got nicer at every bar then u spit that and it messed up what would be a good closer....4.5/10

overall:29/50

$$upreme:nice battle for you

Shit Is Bout To Pop Off Like Shadows Edge Taking A #2 In A Popcorn Machine*
My Punches Come Twice As Hard, You Must Think This Battle Is A Tag Team*
^^wasnt feelin that opener nice punch tho work on structure....5/10

Look Pussy There's No Way I Can Lose Me And Cprogress Are Tighter Then Virgins*
Im Second In Charge, I’ll Operate On Shadows Edge Like A Medical Surgeon*
^^that was a good bar i was feelin it nice vocab i think u need to work on multis tho and a lil less filler.....7/10

Your Ryhmes Are All Over The Place Like Vlade Divac The Floppy-hoe*
I Thought I Was Battling A Ham-burger Your Structure Is Messier Then Sloppy-joe*
^^haha i should give u a 0/10 for that cuz sacremento kings is ma team lol but nice bar overall....7.5/10

When $$upreme Drops….take Notes Shadows Edge*
Biography: College Student…. This Verse Will Make You Drop Out Like Kayne West*
^^ once again you are gonna get a lower score than u should cuz your structure work on that for real nice bar tho.....5/10

My Lyrical Ammo Will Have You Dodgin Bullets*
When Them Bars Hit Cha You'll Die-hard Like Bruce Willis*
^^i think this could be your best bar im gonna give u a.......8/10

You Must Think I Attend Baby-showers, The Way I Reign-on-kids*
Beating-yo-meat Is The Only Way U Cum Hard, Idol Must Be Jason Biggs*
^^ lol nice use of american pie history.....good closer....7/10

overall:34.5/50

u had an extra bar so i took out the bar with the lowest score to make it even
either way u had a better verse i know shadows got skill but he just didnt show it this battle nice battle

vote: $$upreme

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