uppin for votes......need two more votes.....................

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need votes man
please give me votes
need votes man
please give me votes
i'll return tha favor
ight

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vote niggas
 

where are the votes at.........c'mon kids...vote niggas

aight check it....

LostChild
Flow:5/10
Wordusage:4/10
Vocabulary:2/10
Creativity:3/10
Punches:5/10
Opener:2/10
Closer:no comment

Overall:22

Comment:
man...what were you thinkin in this one guy....to tell the truth your cshit was the weakest of all im tellin you...punches werent there( if any ) and your Vocab sux, take my advice and go back to the 1st grade and learn da basics

Favorite line: there wasnt one

CreaTivitie
Flow:5/10
Wordusage:6/10
Vocabulary:5/10
Creativity:6/10
Punches:5/10
Opener:4/10
Closer:6/10

Overall:37

Comment:
dogg go to elevated coz all these newbs arent nothin...i coulda had my lil sis kill this "lost child" but really though this was a blow out...

Favorite line: i really didnt like any of them but since you won ill give you one i thought was almost good...The closer...it was ur best line

v/ creaTivitie

be sure to return da favor with NO HATE...

i am in elevated..im tryn to get peeps to go over there..you should be in elevated.....

uppin for vote number 5

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uppin for the last vote hopefully......................

Flow 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Metas 7/10
Multis 6/10
32/50
work on ur personals ant structure and vocab
Creativitie
Flow 7/10
Structure 8/10
Punches 7/10
Metas 6/10
Multis 7/10
work on vocab
35/50