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Willa 04-25-04 12:08 AM

Vango U Came way To Sexual good flow and structure your punches hit decently your verse wasnt creative enough i was feelin ur opener thoguh kid

Disasterpeice420 verse was dope your structure was good ya punches were on. you were consistent in this battle came very creative nice all around peice u simply were more consistent.

vote disasterpeice420

Vango 04-25-04 06:20 PM

what kind of feedback is that?????????????????????/

Da Vinci 04-25-04 06:22 PM

Yo, I'll vote on this, return the favour and vote on mine.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120615
I'm vote'n right now.

Da Vinci 04-25-04 06:32 PM

Well damn, I hate to stand out so damn much but I gotta go the other way on this one. I thought that Vango's punches hit way harder.

Let Me Get This Shit Over, So We Can Out Whose Better/
Cuz Once Im Done Spittin Youll Be Reppin Class Sic Letters/

I Dont Know If I Should Battle You Baby Or Stick My Cock In Your Mouth/
See After Seein Your Pics, I See You Put The Dirty In South/

You The Only Opponent Ive Battled Whose Already Bleeding/

I thought some of those were pretty sick lines, that hit harder. There was good flow so it made it easy to read.

Comedian You Use Those Hard Words For 'Expression'
I Still Read It, Laugh At It And Kill It With No 'Question'
- a pretty good opener but i hate the line that follows

I'm Like Bin Laden You The USA I Keep You In 'Fear'
The Only Way To Make It Alive Is To Dissapear From This 'Stratosphear'
- wasnt' feel'n this at all

I Don't Need To Work On My Fitness
To Destroy You And Become The Queen Of This Site With 'Quickness'
-again not really feel'n the fitness bit

I'm given this one to Vango, cause I thought his punches hit harder, but it looks like I'm the only one (lol) but I gotta be straight.

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-26-04 04:54 PM

Thanks Will A Peer For The Vote Good Looking Out!! BabyGyal .....!!!!

Daps Da Vinci' ... Its All Good!' - - -!!!


Uppppppppppppin 4 Votes' Yall ...

Close This Shit For Real' .....

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-26-04 06:17 PM

C'Mon Ya'll And Close This Shit!! DAMN What Does It Take To Get Some Votes Around Here' ....!!!!! Drop A Vote' .. And I Will Return The Favor' !!! ...!!


-Appriciate It-

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-26-04 06:29 PM

C'Mon Ya'll And Close This Shit!! DAMN What Does It Take To Get Some Votes Around Here' ....!!!!! Drop A Vote' .. And I Will Return The Favor' !!! ...!!


-Appriciate It-

Vc 04-26-04 06:29 PM

aint this a bitch!??? i thought vango was better than that.... anybody can rhyme off sex cracks for a long time.... nobody ebtter than me i wrote a 6 page poem purely rhyming off sex. so thast nothign u didnt have the personald thats you needed... and some of ya words were very repetitive ,i expected better from you vango...

i gotta give this to disaster b/c she had the nice flow her rhyems were consistent and they were not repetitive and they were structured nicely but most important of all she changed thourhg multiple subjects she did not stick to one thing liek vango with his sex.....

i kinda wanted dp back in class sic.. but she won this battle tho..

Vc 04-26-04 06:31 PM

damn!
 
aint this a bitch!??? i thought vango was better than that.... anybody can rhyme off sex cracks for a long time.... nobody ebtter than me i wrote a 6 page poem purely rhyming off sex. so thast nothign u didnt have the personald thats you needed... and some of ya words were very repetitive ,i expected better from you vango...

i gotta give this to disaster b/c she had the nice flow her rhyems were consistent and they were not repetitive and they were structured nicely but most important of all she changed thourhg multiple subjects she did not stick to one thing liek vango with his sex.....

i kinda wanted dp back in class sic.. but she won this battle tho..


vote my battles peoples....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120368

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-26-04 06:41 PM

Aww' You Know' I Feel Flattered And All - - - Ya'll Wanting Me Back In Class Sic :)


Anyways Upppin 4 Votes' -- Highly Appriciated --

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-26-04 06:50 PM

C'Mon Ya'll And Close This Shit!! DAMN What Does It Take To Get Some Votes Around Here' ....!!!!! Drop A Vote' .. And I Will Return The Favor' !!! ...!!


-Appriciate It-


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