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j rip you had a nice flow and good use of multies i just didnt seen any good punchlines or personals this was a weak battle verse but could be a good open mic piece lol just work on punchs and personals and you be pretty good

shadows edge nice verse seem like you get better every battle that use of the numbers changin was pretty sick i was gonna do that shit lol nice punchs and personals overall nice verse

vote shadows edge

Edge- Nice personals good punches he had betta overall verse. but could being done betta.

J- aight no creative punches at all no personals. Nice multi's but the rest was BLAH!!! elevate. both..

return fav

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