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Hybrid 04-28-04 04:20 AM

$upreme: you punches were not that hard hitting, your personals didnt really effect your performance in any way your lines were mega stretched and dont put your verse in bold or change the size, your flow was kinda off too.No lines really stood out and some of your concepts were played like semen thats been done to death.
My Favourite Line:
"My Flow Is Like Carbon Dioxide, While There's Time Left Release The Infection
I'll Tear Through Ya' Insides, And Leave Your Back Bone To Head With Disconnection"


JPoll: i like your verse quite witty and funny your punches were far stronger and personals were directed at hime far better, nice flow although 1 line was stretched a bit still very good spit wasnt the best but still much better than supreme's.
My Favourite Line:
"Supreme you got 9 losses, an still you call urself a vet?
Ur leader hates ur crew he's joining a new, I guess ur the "classic reject"

Overall: This was a decent battle but clearly one sided, only by stronger attributes not weakness on any part yet not done to the best of both of you. keep at it! peace


My Vote: JPoll

Hybrid 04-28-04 04:22 AM

I'll poll my vote after i get 50 posts done. peace

guyver4mk 04-28-04 05:36 AM

Breakdown:

$$upreme

My Ryhmes Are Like Good Sex, But My Lyrics Will Unfortunatly Make Ur Backbone Curl*
We All Know U A Nasty Pervert, J-poll Got More "seamen" Fondlin Animals Then Seaworld*

-=so so opener. I've seen better by u double dollar=- 4/10

J-poll Is Like Injured Reserve The Game Doesn’t Really Need You*
I’ll Go In Your Cerebellum Cut Off Your Oxygen Supply And Lyrically Brain Feed You*

-=Finish started good, coulda bin better. This is one of ur poorer verses man=- 5/10
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JPoll

yo
Supreme you got 9 losses, an still you call urself a vet?
Ur leader hates ur crew he's joining a new, I guess ur the "classic reject"

-=Shits funny man. I seen better, but thats good=- 6/10

Yur major malfunction, he's an unoriginal bitch,his song prolly bout cash n cars
My two cents- ELEVATE, i mean it was 3 years ago that people put "*" after bars!!!

-=thats good, I like the punch, one of ur better ones=- 7/10

Overall, double dollar had a few too many blind one ups and not enough punches. Structure was good in both an so was the flow. JPolls was easier to get through, those 1ups made me cringe.

Vote// JPoll


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