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yo, this was a tight battle in my opinion. I was feelin' Ill's a tiny bit, though. Born I liked your verse a lot. It had some hard hittin' punches and a good opener and closer. But I think that the flow was a littl shaky in some of the areas.
Ill, you had a hot verse. I like your punches, and your opener and closer were pretty good too. Your flow wasn't the best, but it was a little better than Born's. so my vote goes to you. honest vote, don't hate. V=Ill |
ima going with ILL i thought he came out harder born2spit came out hard to....... but i don thtink all of his punches were connecting and he fell off... ILL fell off a bit but not as much as Born2spit it was an ok battle not all that overall im going with ill cos of punches.
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OKay... we need an admin in here..we need to check Ills pm.. hmm.. it seems odd how EVERYONE says my punches were way harder... and this nigga comes in and says my punches werent connected? nigga plz...
Admins pull back votes of mine cuz they werent explained well... wtf is up wit this niggas vote? |
Uppin for "honest" votes people.. plz explain ur votes and make em honest plz
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Born2Spitt thats a live sig......But just like ya said lets get some honest votes in here.......The favor will be return....
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ok ill you had some punches that hit hard and some that didnt some were good some were terrible your verse was 7/10 punches 7/10 flow 8/10 overall 21/30 born2spit overall 8/10 punches 8/10 flow 7/10 overall 23/30 ill had better flow but bon2spit was better overall |
Thats wut im talken bout... thx for explaining ur vote bro.. can everyone that had there vote disqualified take some time out and explain it here plz?
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its still not going to be added so why to try...LOL....But nice battle though..Very close
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CLOSE BATTLE??? nikka.. it was 5-2.. then called back.. u call that close?
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yo ummm doggs i voted on ya'll battle...now return dat favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=108421 ^^^^da link rite there |
Uppin for more votes plz ^^^
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Uppin for honest votes plz... ive been votin for almost everyones battle.. gotta respect that and help out
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this was a nice battle good from both ya
ill nice flows style creativity structure good...keep up wit it and youll be known out there born good battle nice flows style creativity structure you came at it hard but ill came at it a lil harder keep up wit yo shit good battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
uupin this......Vote ill return tha favor.....comeone.....
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boy boy boy both of yall shit was hot the hottest line for you ill was In compare to me hes paper and im about to (ripp) him so much he goin to need tape(get it) the hottest line for born 2 spit was
Nigga, U get banned from every block just like u nomadic// ur own moms kicks u to the curb and post a sign -NO FAGGOTS-// both are good and this shit is hard gotta lookagain......................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .but my vote honestly gos to................................................ .................................................. ...................ill Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
thanx yo.....uppin......lets get soem votes and explain them
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uppin
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ill - iight ur flow was fucke dup b/c of mad stretched lines...ur punches were played except for a few that were decent....wordplay was obviously not there....keep werkin on meta's....use betta personals....jus elevate and ull get betta.....
born - damn u killed this battle....u had hot flow and hot punches....ur meta's were hot and u had a couple hot personals...sick flow....nice verse...keep droppin and stay active....elevate more and ull be dope.... Vote - born2spit....he had a nice flow and sick punches...no hate to ILL....jus elevate dawg cuz ull get betta..... |
man what a d/r vote.....How is my stuff played and nobody used the lines b4...thats a messed up vote yo....aight.....fine then want to play like that aight.....uppin one more vote come on people lets vote please...
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Ill.. its there decision.. anything not in ur favor is a dick ride?? nigga plz.. kid ur wack thats why nobody likes u and ur gettin kicked da fuck out of DA ARMY.. so they can really be "da army"..
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ok u shut the hell up......lets just battle and stop arguin thats all you know how to do.....just stop and battle and say uppin and stuff....no need to hate on each otha aight
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ok good verses from both people...ill u had a couple flaws which were...your lack of structure...some lines are short and the 2nd line is triple the length...makes it a harder read...your punches were good hard hitting and i think better than borns...and personals ill merked born...born u didnt really say anything personal about him...but ill was using personals and punches flow and wordplay in the same bars which made it more complex but an interesting read...born u had perfect structure and flow and strong punches and wordplay...
best bar in battle: my flows 'disasterous', and you cant 'handle this'// nigga, fuck this 'rappin shit', i'll strap ya back wit explosive 'packages'// worst bar in battle: this is probably one of the most played lines ever just u reworded it bitch why am I wastin my time on you or even bother// You couldn't drop knowledge even if Einstein was your father// vote: ill...i think the personals won this battle for him and personals always hit harder than punches...born u had some good shyt too but not good enough to win this battle..i think u had a couple played punches but other than that and lack of personals u got madd skill...a remtach would be good ~!1!~ |
godd damn nice battle but in the end im feelin ILL.....
ILL's flow was jus directed at ill so much that born culdnt come back jus look at these lines man You not learnin nothing from beating newbs theres nothing your gainin..... But this bitch is gey...He gets more dick than J'lo in trainin....... hahah Born2spitt you chose to battle me I thats your dicision..... You think you was born2spitt..Bitch you was born to fix my television.... it was gangsta i was feelin it but born did come back wit dis line Nigga i'll slap ya silly, what ya gonna do// You a Dominican in America repping a Canadian crew// damn hott battle yall.....but in the end i prefer...... ILL Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
Born2spitt you chose to battle me I thats your dicision.....
You think you was born2spitt..Bitch you was born to fix my television.... ^^^^ decent opener...but, it could've been worded better hes a homo,O yea yall didnt know he takes it up the butt.... He wants pussy so bad he stay up at 3'o clock (am) watching BET uncut... ^^^ how can he be both a homo and want pussy? don't get it...!!?!! I dont know what bars is I think you mean 10 lines but I think im doin fine.. But since you said 10 bars I helped you and ended it with a 20th line.... ^^^ closer was not strong man... 1...work on your line length...the flow is off from too many damn syllables...if you're gonna do that, then increase internal rhyming by 75%... um... Hold your head high nigga, lean backwards and relax// don't let me shock you, paramedics in casualty'll do that// ^^..that's hot...not funny...not that hard hitting...but slick...decent opener You a Dominican in America repping a Canadian crew// this kid makin me boil up, this boy is just a flamboyant fuck// ^^^ nice personal...but, it coulda hit harder...i was waiting for the knockout blow with the set-up...but, youi didn't deliver it You couldn't drop knowledge even if Einstein was your father// and i see why u dont do topicals...u write verses so poorly// That a drama still wouldn't be good even wit a "twist" in the story// ^^^^ decent closer...better than I'lls...but, not quite the knockout punch I thought you would bring... Flow: Born Rhymes: Born Punches: Born Vote: Born |
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