i liked the team of triple n and e looch my fav line was that cum stain line from triplen e looch you can hard to laughed my ass of for this whole battle

kingz nice verse came hard like your punches you too had me laughin my ass off spul you had um nice punches but not what im uesed to seein man overall i gave this to triple n and e looch

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aight check it

team 1:
flow:7/10
wordplay:7/10
vocab:8/10
punches:7/10
Creativity:6/10
Opener:6/10
closer:6/10
overall:47/70

Comment:yo were pretty consistant in ur flows and ur punches hit a bit harder than team IIs

Fav/line:kings opener against e looch


Team II
flow:6/10
wordplay:7/10
vocab:7/10
punches:8/10
Creativity:6.10
Opener:6/10
closer:6/10
overall:46/70

Comment:well what can i tell ya ur punches didnt hit as hard as team 1s.

Fav/line:closer for spul

vote/team 1

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spul nice flow ok vocab could use a little work structure pretty good structure could try to even lines out a lil bit u came with nice personals id like 2 c more multis thouhg u had a few played lines but 4 the most part were pretty creative i liked how u used the first letters thats ill so urs is pretty advanced im gonna give u a 8.5/10
tripplen ur structure wasnt quite as good as spuls ur lines were uneven quite a bit so that could use some work u came with mad personals like spul u had ok vocab couyld use some work though u came really played like every line was played so u need to work on creativity ur verse was good but dropped off on the 2 verse ill give u a 5.5/10
kings ok verse u flow stuck in a few places but was pretty good ur structure was pretty good u came a lil played though so u need to work on creativity u came with good personals pretty good verse ive ssen better from u though ill give u a 7/10

ok
elooch ur strusture could use a lil help a few of ur lines were really uneven ur flow started out really nice and slowly faded off it could use some work ur creativity was ok u didnt have very good personals like the reast ur vocab was the best out of all or them but u just didnt have a very good verse i fetl ill give u a 6.5/10 ive seen better from u
so spuls team 15.5/20
tripples team 12/20 u really didnt work up 2 ur potential id like 2 c a rematch

uppin for 2 votes

up for 2 more votes people i be votin an ho ass nikkas dotn return shit like a bitch

Ight i aint gonna break down line by line but here:
Spul=Decent ur punches kinda short def not ur best but had good flow
Kingz=Hot shit Nice punches and Awsome flow all over good
together 8.5/10

Trip=Nice had good flow and some nice punches
Looch=Nice punches flow was equal and that Iraqi thing was Hilarious great personal
Together=8.6/10

Very close just think Trip and Looch came harder...Spul if u woulda had some better punches u woulda took it. Nice battle though

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blahh.. ill vote on this later....................

upppp for 1 vote explain it to so it cant be removed damn it

yo it was all good and stuff but i give it to the N guy cuz the low blows was crazy son ... nah mean

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Team one (spul kings)
flow:7
Structure:8
punches and personals:5
opener (both):5
closer (both):7
32

Team two (E looch Tripple n)
flow:8
Structure:7
punches and personals:6
opener (both):5
closer (both):5
31

best line team one:
Done and weak, you’re like a pitcher tired, after throwin’ thirty
Your punches are more played out… then a throwback jersey

Best line team two:
Him an spul run the streets in their little homo groups
Those two together choke down more balls than "basketball hoops"

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Uppin for WELL EXPLAINED VOTES, Holla Back^^^^^^^^

oh my god...if that is unexplained then i am the mother fuckin teresa...bull shit...

ok...the breakdown

Spul:

Your flow was on..your punches were decent..but I would like to see more wordplay in this..

Flow 6
Rhyme 7
Punches 7


Kingz:

I personally loved your flow..your punches were set up nice, but they didn't hit as hard as they should have.

Flow 7
RHymes 7
Punches 6


Triple N

Your wordplay is on point. But, one or two punches were played "gas tank refill" Also, the "tryna be black" line is a NO-NO.....

Flow 7
Rhyme 7
Punches 7

Elo:

Your verse was well written...u had prolly the best vocab out the bunch...but, the spelling of the name is gay and played.

Flow 6
RHyme 7
Punches 7

Totals:

Spul/Kin: 40 outta 60

Tripl/Elo: 41 outta 60


close one...but

Vote: Triple and Elo...more complexity in their verses...i.e., better wordplay/vocab


HOLLA
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Man this took a while yall should personally thank all that fuckin read this shit cuz it took a while never the less i thought that all 4 came on the same level of consistantcy i recall another where 2 were decent and one was hot other was eh and i had to give it to the 2 consitants cuz of TEAM

Down to buissness Good good good good battle yall real tough to judge and im not gonna do the "u need to elevate shit either"cuz yall was fire plus that line gettin tired on the ballots anywayz "weak that was weak eh was decent but weak"im not usin none of those either

i really honestly felt triple -n- and e-looch were a lil more consitant on there deliveries as i thought both teams hit well and flowed decent i had to break it down a lil further and literally flow it outloud to see what i felt was betta and thought e looch and -N- were a lil hotta hey no disrespect to none just an honest opinion yall didn t gimme much to werk with REAL CLOSE ONE YALL SHOULD REMATCH IT!