yo this was ight

mad dog ur punches didnt hit thathard,but ur multis and structure and flow was all good man...and the wordplay was decent....good job just elevate on makin the punches hit harder ok

riddle u did have decent punches but i didnt like ya structure ur flow was ok and you didnt really have any multi's or word play....but work on havin structure...and work on havin multi's and wordplay in ya verse homie.....keep elevating

v/mad dog


return the favor please guys
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...355#post1319355
thanx