FLOW u came wit it pimpin.....that was some good rhymin at the start but in the middle you sort of loss me.nice rhymin. i understood your perspective and dat was tight

meta good versse too...u laid it down to a point but u could of came wit bettr vocab though a few lines caught me.
v/flow

well that would have been my vote if i had enough post.......................srry

lol cant be serious Lol, even Flow admitted I won But if you say so lol

meta and flow nice drops from both of u.you both stayed on topic and to the point.flow ur verse didnt have much imagery it told a story and thats wat i like wen it tells the story cause imagery dont matter. u had a good flow and good strucuture so it was easy to rtead it and understand.meta ur verse had good strucutre not a great flow. it needed some work it jus wasnt as good.

v/flow
drop a vote on my topical
http://community.rapbattles.com/forumdisplay.php?f=192

^^ill poll it once u drop a vote on mine thats the only way to get ppl to vote on battles im tired of uppin jus drop a honest vote and i will come bak and poll it

^^wrong link my fault heres the link to my topical sorry but at least it keeps uppin the battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131966

uppin

aight this was a good topical battle wun of tha best ive seen
x-yur verse was good nice flow everyting structure great i can really make a picture on waat u wrote so thats why its a good verse
flow u had a nice verse to but it wasnt that complex u kno u tlaked bout lotta stuff in jail but not really enuff bout life in it but yeah anyways u had nice flow and good structure i could make a picture wit yur verse but it was a lil "blurry" but anyways nice topical battle

v/X

Aight Yo Check This..

X: 6/10
Your Flow Was Off Rhythem At Sum Points But Your Emotion Was Aight. Your Imagery Was A LiL Drastic At Sum Points Dawg LOL...But All In All Your Shit Was Nice. Good Drop.

Flow Intelligent: 5.5/10
You Almost Had Him Except I Felt That You Rambled A LiL Bit And Just Feel Off Point In The Middle. Nice Verse In ALl Just X Edged Out THe Win This Time. Nice DRop Though.

Vote - X

~R~

alright this was an okay Topical.......both had good points....and everything else.....Structure I would have to give that to X just becasuse his was even all around and more put together.......flows wasnt that bad but it was a little stretched in some places.....Flow i would have to say that was a tie because both had good flow and i was feeling both the same......Imagery I would give thgis to flow just because i felt his had a little bit more imagery in it then X's......Creativity I would have to give the creativity to X becuase i felt this was more creative and more orignal with the insite and everything then flows........and Emotion I would have to say that X takes the emotion becuase i was feeling all the shit that he was saying and it had more emotion in his verse then flows

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